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Array ( [sid] => 7941 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => He isnt coming back [time] => 2002-12-04 16:00:00 [hometext] => This is another poem i had to write this is the adult looking back and the experiance [bodytext] => I remember the very special bond we had
No one could figure it out
We did everything together
Until the day he passed on
And I was to stay here
To this day I still remember the terrible pain
That awful day replays in my mind
My daddy picked me up and told me
I didn’t believe him I couldn’t believe him
The next picture that flashes in my mind is the funeral
I was so scared and so confused
I remember thinking he was playing hide and seek
But I couldn’t find him
The funeral hall had a musty smell to it
My daddy told me he wasn’t coming back
I yelled at him to stop joking
But I had to come to an understanding he isn’t coming back
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He isnt coming back

Contributed by lil_angel on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I remember the very special bond we had
No one could figure it out
We did everything together
Until the day he passed on
And I was to stay here
To this day I still remember the terrible pain
That awful day replays in my mind
My daddy picked me up and told me
I didn’t believe him I couldn’t believe him
The next picture that flashes in my mind is the funeral
I was so scared and so confused
I remember thinking he was playing hide and seek
But I couldn’t find him
The funeral hall had a musty smell to it
My daddy told me he wasn’t coming back
I yelled at him to stop joking
But I had to come to an understanding he isn’t coming back

Copyright Â© lil_angel ... [ 2002-12-04 16:00:00]
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Re: He isnt coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:51:50 PM AEST
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oi pa, some things are better resolved when yur young... it seems to get harder to have closure when yur older with things like death. good write, i enjoyed it. kudos! ;0) -daniel

Re: He isnt coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 07:39:33 PM AEST
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Beautiful Write!
Jeff

Re: He isnt coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_star_angel on Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 02:21:49 PM AEST
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This is a sad poem. It reminds me of when I lost someone close to me when I was young, and this poem made me cry. Still, it's a good poem.

Re: He isnt coming back (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:33:54 AM AEST
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i do understand what youre coming from. it doesnt seem far when you start finding the close one they take them away.

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