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You’d never do anything to make me blue,
When we fall out it hurts me as much,
Even though I don’t give I to emotions touch.

I hold all my hurt & I try to stop my tears,
As if I cry laid open are all my fears,
I act like I am a statue made of stone,
As I feel most of the time so very alone.

I was once your little angel of love,
I dropped on you from up above,
But now do you feel the same for me?
Please tell me that there’ll always be a WE.

I throw myself at your mercy will you forgive?
Kiss my heart so I can continue to live,
I take your hand please don’t pull it away,
Please tell me you are here to stay.

I know that my tears I don’t always show,
But I am here hurting too I want you to know,
If you hurt, I hurt if you laugh then I laugh,
I don't want our heart to be at the bottom of lifes graph [comments] => 9 [counter] => 333 [topic] => 50 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

Sorry For Hurting You

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:18:21 AM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

I am so sorry for hurting you,
You’d never do anything to make me blue,
When we fall out it hurts me as much,
Even though I don’t give I to emotions touch.

I hold all my hurt & I try to stop my tears,
As if I cry laid open are all my fears,
I act like I am a statue made of stone,
As I feel most of the time so very alone.

I was once your little angel of love,
I dropped on you from up above,
But now do you feel the same for me?
Please tell me that there’ll always be a WE.

I throw myself at your mercy will you forgive?
Kiss my heart so I can continue to live,
I take your hand please don’t pull it away,
Please tell me you are here to stay.

I know that my tears I don’t always show,
But I am here hurting too I want you to know,
If you hurt, I hurt if you laugh then I laugh,
I don't want our heart to be at the bottom of lifes graph

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-01-11 10:18:21]
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Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:18:54 AM AEST
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You did it yet again..Great poem

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by skyblumoon on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:34:43 AM AEST
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Very powerful poem. I hope all is well with you
Hugs
Blu

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilcaf on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:34:55 AM AEST
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a poem full of sorrow and pain, i hope things go right for you. great write xx

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:57:33 AM AEST
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Maybe rephrase that very last phrase somehow... But only because "bath" is a noun, bathe is the verb form. But I understand the difficulty of getting something to rhyme with laugh. Oh I know - maybe "I want A bath?" All the rest is very sad and sweet, Pixie, and I hope it helps Cheers! (and hugs)

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:14:11 PM AEST
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Pixie girl you are so talented with your writes and so much emotions so all so powerful.
great job . hugs

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by julieh on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:38:22 PM AEST
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another brilliant one pixie...take care ju

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:53:29 PM AEST
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well written pixie.
Your poem is full of sadness and pain.
I hope everything goes well for you.
luv,
sue

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by devine_xox on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:03:41 PM AEST
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Not many poems can bring tears to my eyes but this one did,You are brilliant. Goodluck with things xoxo

Re: Sorry For Hurting You (User Rating: 1 )
by 307luvs09 on Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:53:16 PM AEST
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And another one. This one was very appropriate for today. Pixie it seems as if we go through the same days. Thanks for helping me cope, your poems are really dope.

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