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No one really knows why
We do everything together
One day he dies
I am left here without him
My daddy picks me up from Lynn’s
Its six days after my sixth birthday
He tells me that Nicky died during the night
I wont believe him, I cant believe him
I go to the funeral
Nicky must be playing hide and seek but I can’t find him
He must have found a really good spot
“It smells in here daddy
Lets go to the park
Can Nicky come?
But you have to help me find him”
He sits me down
And tells me that Nicky is in heaven with God
I wont hear it
Nicky is here
He wouldn’t leave me
I just have to find him then we can go to the park
“Nicky where are you?”
Then I realize he is safe and out of pain
“I miss you Nicky
But I will see you in heaven I whisper
I love you and good-bye”
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Nicky is Gone

Contributed by lil_angel on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

My cousin and I have a very special bond
No one really knows why
We do everything together
One day he dies
I am left here without him
My daddy picks me up from Lynn’s
Its six days after my sixth birthday
He tells me that Nicky died during the night
I wont believe him, I cant believe him
I go to the funeral
Nicky must be playing hide and seek but I can’t find him
He must have found a really good spot
“It smells in here daddy
Lets go to the park
Can Nicky come?
But you have to help me find him”
He sits me down
And tells me that Nicky is in heaven with God
I wont hear it
Nicky is here
He wouldn’t leave me
I just have to find him then we can go to the park
“Nicky where are you?”
Then I realize he is safe and out of pain
“I miss you Nicky
But I will see you in heaven I whisper
I love you and good-bye”

Copyright Â© lil_angel ... [ 2002-12-04 15:30:00]
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Re: Nicky is Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 10:00:01 AM AEST
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AAww this was so sad,very touching!
Christina

Re: Nicky is Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 01:43:56 AM AEST
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Just remember he's in a place where angels can look down and watch over us all. He's not in no pain

Re: Nicky is Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:25:14 AM AEST
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wow this is cute and sad. i think when gods wants us he knows when the time to take us cause were not in pain no more. i do know the people down here are in pain cause he left the people down here hurt and alone.

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