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Array ( [sid] => 79398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i want to do a thing for you [time] => 2005-01-11 09:27:26 [hometext] => i hope you are happy more and more [bodytext] => i want to do a thing for you

i want to do a thing
for you
that is a happy thing
and hope
to bury a seed deeply
in the bottom of your heart
pray time
to under the cover of the chance
when you are heedless
and let this seed
to be a fruit stealthily

i want to do a thing
for you
that is a worthwhile thing
and wishes
to character my name abidingly
in the top of your heart
if i return
to that position
which still be your best friend
then you will not be vexatious so

love you
love you so much
so i would like to let you
to fly to anywhere you want
love you
love you very much
as long as you get love i just can be happy [comments] => 3 [counter] => 146 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

i want to do a thing for you

Contributed by holy on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:27:26 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

i want to do a thing for you

i want to do a thing
for you
that is a happy thing
and hope
to bury a seed deeply
in the bottom of your heart
pray time
to under the cover of the chance
when you are heedless
and let this seed
to be a fruit stealthily

i want to do a thing
for you
that is a worthwhile thing
and wishes
to character my name abidingly
in the top of your heart
if i return
to that position
which still be your best friend
then you will not be vexatious so

love you
love you so much
so i would like to let you
to fly to anywhere you want
love you
love you very much
as long as you get love i just can be happy

Copyright © holy ... [ 2005-01-11 09:27:26]
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Re: i want to do a thing for you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:28:23 AM AEST
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theres alot of love and feeling gone into this poem, good write
pixie xx

Re: i want to do a thing for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:35:37 AM AEST
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awwww very sweet and so full of love!

Re: i want to do a thing for you (User Rating: 1 )
by vox on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:25:58 PM AEST
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sweet indeed.

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