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Array ( [sid] => 79377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Isolation [time] => 2005-01-11 00:04:11 [hometext] => wrote one night when i was really ***** up comments appreciated [bodytext] => Black and red colors ahead
Questioning am i alive or dead
Its hard to say these thoughts today
But i just cant seem to find my way
All the things i've said and done,
And all the empty words that run
,Keep me where i am right now
Trying to change the past somehow
In my head these stories play
Taunting and teasing in everyway
What is real and wat is not
,Hope the hell i dont get caught
With all these thoughts inside my head
Sure what the hell pass over tha meds
And maybe i'll calm down for awhile
Counting the blood upon the tile
Blistered feet and bloodshot eyes,
Try to cover up the lies
So much company yet alone,
Flying off just in my zone,
Full of blood sweat and tears and all the faces from the years
Showing so many hollowing regrets
As if someone just broke the net. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 13 [informant] => MorbidDeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Isolation

Contributed by MorbidDeath on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 12:04:11 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Black and red colors ahead
Questioning am i alive or dead
Its hard to say these thoughts today
But i just cant seem to find my way
All the things i've said and done,
And all the empty words that run
,Keep me where i am right now
Trying to change the past somehow
In my head these stories play
Taunting and teasing in everyway
What is real and wat is not
,Hope the hell i dont get caught
With all these thoughts inside my head
Sure what the hell pass over tha meds
And maybe i'll calm down for awhile
Counting the blood upon the tile
Blistered feet and bloodshot eyes,
Try to cover up the lies
So much company yet alone,
Flying off just in my zone,
Full of blood sweat and tears and all the faces from the years
Showing so many hollowing regrets
As if someone just broke the net.

Copyright © MorbidDeath ... [ 2005-01-11 00:04:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 10:34:02 AM AEST
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I hear you there life is hell sometime you just gotta pick yourself up and be stronge.great write.

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:52:44 PM AEST
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The title drew me in and the write expresses the emotions & experiences so many keep bottled up inside. Dare I say this bleeds well, for it does.

peace
TS

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 01:10:33 PM AEST
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Well written I like it. x.

Re: Isolation (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 07:15:09 PM AEST
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wow....i remember being that #$*&#E up. i was what u described and worse. everything wa playing in me head and i found ways i coulda done better, so many mistakes, repetition...time....i was going crazy.....great job tho....

if your mind is curious please take a peak at my work....and express yourself....

summer

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