Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	29-May 15:47:55 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 7937 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Your Eyes [time] => 2002-12-04 14:30:00 [hometext] => ....the soft side of a warrior....(me) [bodytext] => When I look
into your eyes,
I feel my heart
increase in size.
I almost feel
my body get hot,
If you had a web
I think I'd be caught.

When our eyes meet
we tend to show a smile,
Thats what I haven't seen
in quite a very long while.
When I look into your eyes
my entire world slows down,
But you seem to be the factor
that makes my whole world go 'round.

When I look into your eyes
I almost don't want to blink,
If my mind was pen
I'd run out of ink.
The way I think of you
can't be described by mouth,
Pencil is the best way
I talk in the South.

When our eyes depart
my day nearly goes bad,
Because people are always
trying to find a way to make me mad.
I then figure out
that we'll meet again,
Maybe then I'll have courage
enough to ask you to be my girlfriend.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Sonibe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Your Eyes

Contributed by Sonibe on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When I look
into your eyes,
I feel my heart
increase in size.
I almost feel
my body get hot,
If you had a web
I think I'd be caught.

When our eyes meet
we tend to show a smile,
Thats what I haven't seen
in quite a very long while.
When I look into your eyes
my entire world slows down,
But you seem to be the factor
that makes my whole world go 'round.

When I look into your eyes
I almost don't want to blink,
If my mind was pen
I'd run out of ink.
The way I think of you
can't be described by mouth,
Pencil is the best way
I talk in the South.

When our eyes depart
my day nearly goes bad,
Because people are always
trying to find a way to make me mad.
I then figure out
that we'll meet again,
Maybe then I'll have courage
enough to ask you to be my girlfriend.

Copyright © Sonibe ... [ 2002-12-04 14:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 11:54:54 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Oh bravo my favorite lines are the last ones....Maybe then i'll have courage enough to ask you to be my girlfriend.....ah....don't ever let fear stop you from what you want in life....not ever...fear is destructive...thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:01:26 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this poem
is so romantic
and sweet .

Re: Your Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Sunday, 4th July 2004 @ 01:08:21 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Hey My Melvin I finally got on to read some of your poems and this is awesome!! great job!!

Darlene

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com