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Wont let the speaking stares hit me
Can't find where I begin and end
Hear this, my solitary plea
Bright eyes, that's what they call me
But bright eyes, has a darkened soul
You don't know what these bright eyes see
Ten thousand tragedies they hold
Curled up in a lonely corner
Afraid of fear and this dismay
Only me a broken mourner
Tell my curse it cannot stay
Blind is my crying
Hopeful is my dying
False this denying
To the gates, to the hellish end
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Bright Eyes

Contributed by Pocket on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:56:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Wont let the fear drown me again
Wont let the speaking stares hit me
Can't find where I begin and end
Hear this, my solitary plea
Bright eyes, that's what they call me
But bright eyes, has a darkened soul
You don't know what these bright eyes see
Ten thousand tragedies they hold
Curled up in a lonely corner
Afraid of fear and this dismay
Only me a broken mourner
Tell my curse it cannot stay
Blind is my crying
Hopeful is my dying
False this denying
To the gates, to the hellish end

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Re: Bright Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:57:44 PM AEST
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"Bright eyes, that's what they call me
But bright eyes, has a darkened soul
You don't know what these bright eyes see
Ten thousand tragedies they hold"
...Wow...
Awesome write.

Re: Bright Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:02:37 PM AEST
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this was wicked! it took my breath away, very deep and sad. keep up the great poetry!

Re: Bright Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:55:47 PM AEST
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seems like everyone will see those gates these days. life and death arent as they seem though.

Re: Bright Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by twobabies on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 08:33:54 PM AEST
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great usage of words. very dramatic. i loved it. keep it up i'll be looking for more of your work.

Re: Bright Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Sunday, 3rd October 2010 @ 03:01:24 PM AEST
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Well written..thanks for sharing this with us..
take care

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