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Array ( [sid] => 79337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => thirteen [time] => 2005-01-10 19:43:14 [hometext] => a wrote this song awhile back....its called thirteen because these feelings started to develop when my teen years came [bodytext] => sometimes it seems too hard/ to be happy and carefree
not knowing what to do with myself/ through this rain i cannot see

and sometimes it seems too hard/ to smile
to be a kid without a care/ of my inner angst you are all unaware

this is real tiring/ dont think i can stay
so come on/ anyone take me away

thirteen/young and dumb

(chorus)
i like it/ im not gonna cry
im alone/im not gonna cry
so happy/ im not gonna cry
im helpless/ im not gonna cry

drowning in my pity/ it all seems unreal
a future unknown and dangerous/ somebody tell me what to feel

this is real tiring/ dont think i can stay
so come on/ anyone take me away
thirteen/ young and dumb
(chorus)

sometimes it seems too hard/ to be happy and carefree
not knowing what to do with myself/ through this rain i cannot see

its as if these years are endless/ smothered in my tears and strife
am i honestly the only one/ that wishes for a different life? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 34 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

thirteen

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:43:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

sometimes it seems too hard/ to be happy and carefree
not knowing what to do with myself/ through this rain i cannot see

and sometimes it seems too hard/ to smile
to be a kid without a care/ of my inner angst you are all unaware

this is real tiring/ dont think i can stay
so come on/ anyone take me away

thirteen/young and dumb

(chorus)
i like it/ im not gonna cry
im alone/im not gonna cry
so happy/ im not gonna cry
im helpless/ im not gonna cry

drowning in my pity/ it all seems unreal
a future unknown and dangerous/ somebody tell me what to feel

this is real tiring/ dont think i can stay
so come on/ anyone take me away
thirteen/ young and dumb
(chorus)

sometimes it seems too hard/ to be happy and carefree
not knowing what to do with myself/ through this rain i cannot see

its as if these years are endless/ smothered in my tears and strife
am i honestly the only one/ that wishes for a different life?

Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-01-10 19:43:14]
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Re: thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:05:11 PM AEST
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Ok I am still waiting for the song..Waiting..Wait..Not there.

Re: thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:06:46 PM AEST
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needs to be formatted differently, but other than that very good.

Re: thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by MorbidDeath on Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:36:40 AM AEST
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i thought it was a very good write and really explains how it feels to be a teen i dont know how'd u'd sing it if its suposed to be slow or fast but as for your writing i thought it was great

Re: thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by BrokenAngel on Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:39:24 PM AEST
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This is exactly how i feel and im 13 i guess all 13 yr olds feel like this once and awhile. For me its all the time. But newho great write I'd love to hear the song itself though ya know with music.
_Broken Angel_

Re: thirteen (User Rating: 1 )
by THORN on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:50:42 AM AEST
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*claps*
That was fantastic. I could really feel it and the repetition works very well.
Reminds me very much of LINKIN PARK's style, those guys rock.

But for those who want it with the music, seriously - if you know you're music, notes will play in your head the 1st time you read it.

But back to the lyrics - great, keep writing!

Cheers,
-XxRayeXx

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