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Word after word you speak
I hear no sound
But feel a million emotions
Freedom I find in you
I cant let go
Although with you Im falling
I find myself addicted
To this miracle drug
I cant make it on my own
Day by day you change me
My heart is growing cold
And trust Im losing
But still I find myself more attractive
Although more sarcastic
Slowly I slip away
From All sanity once known
Ive lost myself
Im soneone else
Ive become just like you

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Metamorphosis Of The Soul

Contributed by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:55:19 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I find myself lost in your thoughts
Word after word you speak
I hear no sound
But feel a million emotions
Freedom I find in you
I cant let go
Although with you Im falling
I find myself addicted
To this miracle drug
I cant make it on my own
Day by day you change me
My heart is growing cold
And trust Im losing
But still I find myself more attractive
Although more sarcastic
Slowly I slip away
From All sanity once known
Ive lost myself
Im soneone else
Ive become just like you

Copyright © Daniels_Princess ... [ 2005-01-10 15:55:19]
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Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:13:31 PM AEST
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a very good post

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:37:42 PM AEST
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Afterdark, thank you for the kind words.

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by tractorbabe on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:56:42 PM AEST
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very good poem its like a story of life ..i like it
tractorbabe

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:12:21 PM AEST
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Tractorbabe, thak you for your kind words and for your reply. Im very glad you liked it.

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:27:53 PM AEST
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you need to learn independance again..or you'll get sucked up..

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:52:17 PM AEST
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Interesting write. I liked it. Good job.

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:34:47 PM AEST
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Thank you all for your replies. And, Im my old self again..sometimes when youre with someone, youll do anything just to keep them there..even changing yourself. But in the end..its not worth it. I have someone who loves me..for me now, and Im so much happier.

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:03:10 PM AEST
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Good write, and it's so true... you can so easily be sucked out of being yourself for someone else's benefit and your demise.

Love your screen name... :)

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniels_Princess on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:50:17 PM AEST
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Daniela, thank you for the reply. Its like I said in a previous comment, sometimes you love someone so much you try to change just for them. When ultimately, if they dont love you for you..then they never loved you truly. And thanks for the comment on my screen name. It was very sweet of you. =)

Re: Metamorphosis Of The Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:08:41 PM AEST
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Very good poem. Always be yourself.

Scott

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