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[title] => Dreams
[time] => 2005-01-10 06:36:59
[hometext] => Umm A LiL Weird Ideas just kept coming to my head
[bodytext] => Your all by yourself, Your body wear from exausting days. Your Mind Searching for excuses to all asleep....asleep..asleep..not asleep but To another world...a dream world, where you can fall with illusions confusions dilusions falling matters which matter not to you or any one else cause you have already fallen in the pit of dreams. Floating towards the light, ask yourself wat can you see...??? Trippy Trains, faceless people, Flying Planes and hi built steeples. Beautiful girls with long black hair, Bright green eyes which id not share. Incubus is like a nightmare but solid....I melt out the solid and pour out the bad!!Hoping somethign good will come out, But there is nothing. In the distance i see some thing.. A dark fugured Creature. As it drifts towards me i start to see a hollow face...somethign you would only see in a dream..
it has reached me .. the grim reaper, to collect my soul.....
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Dreams
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punkpoet
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:36:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your all by yourself, Your body wear from exausting days. Your Mind Searching for excuses to all asleep....asleep..asleep..not asleep but To another world...a dream world, where you can fall with illusions confusions dilusions falling matters which matter not to you or any one else cause you have already fallen in the pit of dreams. Floating towards the light, ask yourself wat can you see...??? Trippy Trains, faceless people, Flying Planes and hi built steeples. Beautiful girls with long black hair, Bright green eyes which id not share. Incubus is like a nightmare but solid....I melt out the solid and pour out the bad!!Hoping somethign good will come out, But there is nothing. In the distance i see some thing.. A dark fugured Creature. As it drifts towards me i start to see a hollow face...somethign you would only see in a dream..
it has reached me .. the grim reaper, to collect my soul.....
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Re: Dreams
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by TaintedSoul on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:43:38 AM AEST
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This has a slightly dark surrealness to it. Nice write.
peace
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Re: Dreams
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:57:08 PM AEST
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| Your 15 what in God's name could you have to write about? |
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Re: Dreams
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by punkpoet on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:45:13 PM AEST
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BY PUNKPOET
What Kind Of A Question Is That There is no age limit to writing!!!!!!
Who agress?? |
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Re: Dreams
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by subchild on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:56:18 AM AEST
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| Sorry but I agree with Patrick here..I mean as a female myself here,,you are 15 perhaps you have had trouble I guess..But your freaking only 15.. |
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Re: Dreams
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 11:05:29 AM AEST
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what the F?! there's not age limit to writing, only a limit in ones mind/imagination! Just because he's 15 doens't mean that he hasn't been through things, and just cuz he's 15 doesn't mean that he can't write...
If anybody thinks that there's an age limit on writing poetry then you're all just shallow, you're probably just saying that to make up for the fact that you can't write but he, being younger than you, can... Whatever the reason, I don't care... You don't even know him or his problems and you're all just ... ah...
Well anyways this poem is VERY well written, and no matter what those two had to say I think that you're poems are really well written and very well thought of... keep up thegood work and dont let people like them get to you.
*~Alicia~* |
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Re: Dreams
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by punkpoet on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:20:28 AM AEST
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Are you telling me not to write? i can write about what ever i like, Just cause im 15 dosent mean im not ALLOWED to write!!!! I bet Hundreds of people on this site are Around 15 or younger!!!! I am a very mature 15 year old at that and maybe if you knew me better you would know that i have alot to write about and i enjoy writing! I think you are both very rude, immature and low and shallow!!! Is That all you have to do in your time, go around making obscene jestures about young poet masterpieces!??...
Dont Think for one minute that your gonna keep me from writing! I like my work, If you dont have n e thing good to say just keep your trap shut!
regards PUNKPOET
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