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Array ( [sid] => 79219 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Broken Heart [time] => 2005-01-10 02:03:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => BROKEN HEART

Two years, how wonderful they were
and now a Broken Heart
To say it is hard to handle
I wouldn't know where to start

The feelings, at least mine
were so true and real
Each word I ever uttered
I could never conceal

What she meant to me
and my overwhelming desire
Each moment with her, near or far
within my heart, a burning fire

To now know, that her words
were just that, not true
Each and every time
she said I love you

Hopefully time will heal
and the tears will leave my eyes
And my Broken Heart
will recover from all the lies

They say time heals all
of this I am not so sure
One thing I do know
It will not be easy to endure

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Broken Heart

Contributed by BRUCE on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:03:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

BROKEN HEART

Two years, how wonderful they were
and now a Broken Heart
To say it is hard to handle
I wouldn't know where to start

The feelings, at least mine
were so true and real
Each word I ever uttered
I could never conceal

What she meant to me
and my overwhelming desire
Each moment with her, near or far
within my heart, a burning fire

To now know, that her words
were just that, not true
Each and every time
she said I love you

Hopefully time will heal
and the tears will leave my eyes
And my Broken Heart
will recover from all the lies

They say time heals all
of this I am not so sure
One thing I do know
It will not be easy to endure

Copyright © BRUCE ... [ 2005-01-10 02:03:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by CurtisC on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:21:27 AM AEST
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i know exactly where you're coming from man, its tough. Im not so sure about that time heals all stuff too, I mean I'm over her and all, but there's always going to be that little special place for that special someone.

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:18:58 AM AEST
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I hope this is just another good write..time ..well I won't say it..maybe men aren't like me..

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:36:27 AM AEST
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emotional write Bruce, *hugs* you always write so passionatly

pixie xx

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:08:27 PM AEST
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I love this poem, it is so emotional for me. especially right now. I am not feeling so well. beautiful piece!

stew

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:51:18 PM AEST
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Very strong write.

Re: Broken Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 12:20:30 AM AEST
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They say time heals all
of this I am not so sure
One thing I do know
It will not be easy to endure

No, it never is.

The idea that time heals all... wounds..

Is a helpful suggestion in order to help the soul with a great loss.

I can still recall my first love. It was not a puppy love, yet because I was a teenager, that is what it was called.

We have learned to keep going forward, so we do not get trapped by our own standstill. In a sense, it is covering up a wound.. putting a band-aid on the pain. No, the pain never goes away, we just learn how to deal with it. Just as we do, when we lose a loved one from death.

To now know, that her words
were just that, not true
Each and every time
she said I love you

Yes, if we only knew then. But would we still have less the pain?

I like this stanza..

The feelings, at least mine
were so true and real
Each word I ever uttered
I could never conceal

Very valuable self contact...

Raquel Leah ; ))

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