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Array ( [sid] => 79213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Amy 1980-1996 [time] => 2005-01-09 23:57:01 [hometext] => This was written way back in 1996.....I tried to rework it a little....but it was such a long time ago.....not even my tears will give what time took away...always, abraham [bodytext] => Amy,
In hiding, I’ve forgotten the times we had.
Our tears evaporate, serenity closes her hand, and we dance.
No one has ever held me so tightly. (only this tightening despair)
Had i remained, would your hands have been so quickly gone?
(For your life i would have rid myself.)

Amy, how i’ve longed for you, my angel fallen to her knees.
Where have you gone?
Away from here, no torments to follow?
Recalling now our violent words our harsh good-byes
Your eyes were sealed, an honest dissolution, when they found you.
I never understood why...

Your voice, calls to me in dreams, wakes me from my sleep
(What did i do to cause this?) with haunting eyes.
I still remember the dress you wore, your first, for beyond red satins.

Once, my voice could not capture my laughter
your voice breathed supreme over every summer field
Now, your silence lingers over death and fear, your tears

To be with you again, one last time, before the dark plains and summer breezes
bleached your hair, as you told me of your poetry, your pain.

Amy, i think sometimes,
I loved you.

Your friend,

Abraham [comments] => 6 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 39 [informant] => iodinelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
Amy 1980-1996

Contributed by iodinelove on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:57:01 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



Amy,
In hiding, I’ve forgotten the times we had.
Our tears evaporate, serenity closes her hand, and we dance.
No one has ever held me so tightly. (only this tightening despair)
Had i remained, would your hands have been so quickly gone?
(For your life i would have rid myself.)

Amy, how i’ve longed for you, my angel fallen to her knees.
Where have you gone?
Away from here, no torments to follow?
Recalling now our violent words our harsh good-byes
Your eyes were sealed, an honest dissolution, when they found you.
I never understood why...

Your voice, calls to me in dreams, wakes me from my sleep
(What did i do to cause this?) with haunting eyes.
I still remember the dress you wore, your first, for beyond red satins.

Once, my voice could not capture my laughter
your voice breathed supreme over every summer field
Now, your silence lingers over death and fear, your tears

To be with you again, one last time, before the dark plains and summer breezes
bleached your hair, as you told me of your poetry, your pain.

Amy, i think sometimes,
I loved you.

Your friend,

Abraham




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Re: Amy 1980-1996 (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:08:23 AM AEST
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awww wow abraham, another brilliant write...and its so heartbreaking but its simply beautiful...........im sorry for ur loss......but again lovely poem.


Re: Amy 1980-1996 (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:18:22 AM AEST
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This is absolutely beautiful.
Your emotions come out in each and every line of this wonderful write.
I'm sorry to hear about your loss.


Re: Amy 1980-1996 (User Rating: 1 )
by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:04:34 AM AEST
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one word, beauitful.


Re: Amy 1980-1996 (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:28:25 AM AEST
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This was so beautiful, a very poetic write. I love this.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: Amy 1980-1996 (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:38:00 AM AEST
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that was beautiful, I have to echo what the others have already said *hugs*
pixie xx


Re: Amy 1980-1996 (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 04:40:06 PM AEST
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Everything has alrady been said
What can I say
Talk to her when you pray
In the communion of saints I'm sure she will hear
God willing she is an angel there

A wonderful tribute

Sined




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