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Array ( [sid] => 79090 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So You Tell Me [time] => 2005-01-08 22:03:30 [hometext] => again..for my oh so [bodytext] => You tell me I'm stupid, ugly and fat
But the second I cut it's "c'mere we need to chat"
It's like your goal to shoot down my dream
And then you have the nerve to wonder why I have low self-esteem
You tell me I can't ride, write or sing worth crap
Yet when people are near, you tell me i'm good and sit me on your lap
I'm sick of these degrading fights
I'm human too, I have rights!
At least you've helped me to see
What a little whore I can be
I'm everything I hate
Maybe it's just fate
That I don't make it to my next birthday
After all you've never given me reason to stay [comments] => 2 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 6 [informant] => killingmehslowly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

So You Tell Me

Contributed by killingmehslowly on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:03:30 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You tell me I'm stupid, ugly and fat
But the second I cut it's "c'mere we need to chat"
It's like your goal to shoot down my dream
And then you have the nerve to wonder why I have low self-esteem
You tell me I can't ride, write or sing worth crap
Yet when people are near, you tell me i'm good and sit me on your lap
I'm sick of these degrading fights
I'm human too, I have rights!
At least you've helped me to see
What a little whore I can be
I'm everything I hate
Maybe it's just fate
That I don't make it to my next birthday
After all you've never given me reason to stay

Copyright © killingmehslowly ... [ 2005-01-08 22:03:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: So You Tell Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST
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powerful, emotional, and well written write. brilliant. oh well. i think he needs a reality check, because i think you write very well. but hes better off out of your life, why not give him the hint of slamming a door in his face?

Re: So You Tell Me (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:57:03 AM AEST
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wow this is very powerful and very painful.. I understand how you feel. its tough to go through life when you have low esteem but you are a good person and you will see that someday..

Peace and hope
JENNI

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