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Array ( [sid] => 79039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crazy Love Poems [time] => 2005-01-08 17:18:01 [hometext] => Please Comment, thanks a lot [bodytext] => Dear Emily

I cant help thinking Why i even tried
They way you treated me i may aswell of died
If you really think right back to the start
The one thing you'd see is my lonely heart
Attached to you mind, your body your smile
Were you worth the pain, Were you Worth The while??
My Brain says no, My Heart says yes
Maybe because, you seemed like the best.
Was i really that bad, i thought i made you happy
If i was so Stupid, you should of slapped me!
Do you think you were reasonable? Do u think you were fair?
To Do this to me when all i did was care??!!!!!!!
I cant understand, And ill Never know
Why you were so happy to just let me go!
Drugs and drinking was mostly cause of you,
all my happy thoughts executed to so few...
So many tears, i shed on drunk nights
After woosie lil games and stupid fights
I know i rushed in, I rushed it so bad
Myabe if i didnt, i wouldnt bo so sad..
But some how i knew, It was totally over
So i stopped being normal, i stopped being sober
You have moved on i have moved away,
At least you happy i didnt stay...
Im sorry to say i got attached so easily..
It couldnt be so hard to just bloody please me !!!

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Crazy Love Poems

Contributed by punkpoet on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:18:01 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Dear Emily

I cant help thinking Why i even tried
They way you treated me i may aswell of died
If you really think right back to the start
The one thing you'd see is my lonely heart
Attached to you mind, your body your smile
Were you worth the pain, Were you Worth The while??
My Brain says no, My Heart says yes
Maybe because, you seemed like the best.
Was i really that bad, i thought i made you happy
If i was so Stupid, you should of slapped me!
Do you think you were reasonable? Do u think you were fair?
To Do this to me when all i did was care??!!!!!!!
I cant understand, And ill Never know
Why you were so happy to just let me go!
Drugs and drinking was mostly cause of you,
all my happy thoughts executed to so few...
So many tears, i shed on drunk nights
After woosie lil games and stupid fights
I know i rushed in, I rushed it so bad
Myabe if i didnt, i wouldnt bo so sad..
But some how i knew, It was totally over
So i stopped being normal, i stopped being sober
You have moved on i have moved away,
At least you happy i didnt stay...
Im sorry to say i got attached so easily..
It couldnt be so hard to just bloody please me !!!





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Re: Crazy Love Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:30:04 PM AEST
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aww,
I'm sorry for how she made you feel, things supposively happen for a reason, reasons most people never find... but this poem in which you wrote is very clear... You have feelings of regret, yet you wish that you were still with her... she put you through a lot of pain, which is wrong I agree... I don't know what to say to you, but I just hope that one day you'll fin dthe right girl and she'll make you happy... When that day comes I will truely be happy for you, for you have gone through so much sufferring... you are one of the few who deserve a break...

*~Alicia~*


Re: Crazy Love Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:30:10 PM AEST
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Do you want a comment on your poetry or your feelings? last time I critiqued a poem the person PMd me and told me off because I corrected their spelling.. What do you want exactly..PM me and I'll tell you what I think..I was here and I did read your poem...It seems rushed..

aswell of died That's just one example..


Re: Crazy Love Poems (User Rating: 1 )
by punkpoet on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 05:52:48 PM AEST
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TO ANY ONE WHO READS THIS!

If you think this poem is "rushed" as Poetrybear noted please tell me cause im very curiou. Seeing as though it took me and hour to write i very disagree! And i dont rush my poem because i put my whole life and feelings into them.. thank you

punk poet




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