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Array ( [sid] => 79019 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Genderal Confusion [time] => 2005-01-08 15:19:54 [hometext] => This is about a girl I like who seems to have similar feelings for me. Well sometimes it seems like it. But she's the only girl I have ever felt like this about. [bodytext] => Tease me with your gender,
Though I know it's not a problem to you.
Show me that you understand,
That you know what I've had to go through.

Touch me with your sacred hands,
Wrap me in your arms.
Tell me if your scars are false,
Or if your sadness turns into self-harm.

Tempt me with your devious skills,
Of playing with flirtation.
Your games too hard for me to win,
Are feeding my frustration.

Take me with your hand in mine,
Into your secret realm.
I'll run my hands through your dark red hair,
And kiss those lips that overwhelm.

Tell me with your unsure tone,
If what you've said was true.
You told me how you felt for him,
Though you know how I feel for you.

Teach me with your understanding,
The meaning of your actions.
Show me how you feel for me,
So I can attempt to stop these attractions. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Jane_Doe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Genderal Confusion

Contributed by Jane_Doe on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:19:54 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Tease me with your gender,
Though I know it's not a problem to you.
Show me that you understand,
That you know what I've had to go through.

Touch me with your sacred hands,
Wrap me in your arms.
Tell me if your scars are false,
Or if your sadness turns into self-harm.

Tempt me with your devious skills,
Of playing with flirtation.
Your games too hard for me to win,
Are feeding my frustration.

Take me with your hand in mine,
Into your secret realm.
I'll run my hands through your dark red hair,
And kiss those lips that overwhelm.

Tell me with your unsure tone,
If what you've said was true.
You told me how you felt for him,
Though you know how I feel for you.

Teach me with your understanding,
The meaning of your actions.
Show me how you feel for me,
So I can attempt to stop these attractions.

Copyright © Jane_Doe ... [ 2005-01-08 15:19:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Genderal Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:42:50 PM AEST
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Sweet write.

Spazzo

Re: Genderal Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:04:57 PM AEST
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this is the kind of poem you will look back on and remember the way you were feeling at the moment you wrote it. or at least that is the way my emotions work...

~Brenna~

Re: Genderal Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:34:58 PM AEST
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Great write, i really liked it. I'm feeling kinda like this except it's about a guy. But anyways good job!

Re: Genderal Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 04:40:15 AM AEST
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Such a lovely write, something to remember.

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