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Array ( [sid] => 79002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2005-01-08 13:41:28 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Holding my hand down
Stopping myself
You said I was your friend
Said I was your friend
Then you go ahead and say things
Things you’ve never said to me
Say them to another

It’s getting cold again
Trying to find a reason why
Why you never said those things to me
Pushing my hand to the floor
Pushing me through the open door
Now it really is cold outside
Cold outside alone
Alone, alone

Sitting on the front door stoop
Looking for someone to hope
Just sitting on the front door step
Looking for somewhere to be kept
Not making a fuss
Now, waiting for the bus
Just to take me home
Take me home, alone
Without a friend

Want to run away
Can’t believe I’m still just here
Not moved since you pushed me away
Don’t know how long I’ll stay
Until it gets a little warmer
It’s just getting colder
Colder, alone
Someone help me home

Save me, SAVE ME PLEASE
No one stops to help
Watching faces pass before my eyes
People saying their goodbyes
Looking for me
Why don’t they come right here?
And save me
Its getting cold, Winters here
Getting colder
Save me, SAVE ME PLEASE

Frost is kicking in
The darkness has begun to fall
Can’t feel anymore
Except the pain I felt before
Sitting alone on the front door step
I don’t want a fuss
Just a bus
To take me home
Without a friend alone

Would you answer if I call?
Would you catch me if I fall?
Would you help me if I froze all night?
Would you stop me from walking into the light?
Would you help me home?
Would you stop me from being alone?

No one comes to help me
Think I’m drunk, drugged up
Thinking exactly what they see
I’d never be like what they think
If they knew, would they help?
Would they help me home?
Would they stop me from being alone?
SAVE ME PLEASE, SAVE ME PLEASE

Still on the step
No ones been by in an hour or two
All the lights have gone out
I really am without you
I can see a face
Telling me they’ll take me home
Telling me now, I’m not alone

Would you answer if I call?
Would you catch me if I fall?
Would you help me if I froze all night?
Would you stop me from walking into the light?
Would you help me home?
Would you stop me from being alone?

I can see a face
Light spreading around this place
No longer freezing all night
Being told to go into the light
Telling me it’s time to go to a new home
Telling me now I’ll never be alone

Towards the voice, I’m floating
Away from you
Up in the sky, I’m flying
No longer alone
A figure before my eyes
Crying, trying to pull me back down
Trying to save me
Stopping me from freezing in the night
Trying to stop me from walking into the light

Someone answered my call
Would you catch me if I fall?
Someone helped before I froze all night
But told me to start walking into the light
Someone helped me home
Someone stopped me from being alone

I want to feel as light as I do now
I want to keep escaping the cold night
I want to stop being alone
I want to see what’s behind that light

But what if I wake up?
What if I fell asleep?
What if it’s all a dream?
What if I’m still alone?

Please don’t open your door
Don’t find me
Please still hate me
If you see my face don’t help
Leave me on that front door step
Let me go home
I don’t want to be alone [comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 32 [informant] => LucisLucy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Alone

Contributed by LucisLucy on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 01:41:28 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Holding my hand down
Stopping myself
You said I was your friend
Said I was your friend
Then you go ahead and say things
Things you’ve never said to me
Say them to another

It’s getting cold again
Trying to find a reason why
Why you never said those things to me
Pushing my hand to the floor
Pushing me through the open door
Now it really is cold outside
Cold outside alone
Alone, alone

Sitting on the front door stoop
Looking for someone to hope
Just sitting on the front door step
Looking for somewhere to be kept
Not making a fuss
Now, waiting for the bus
Just to take me home
Take me home, alone
Without a friend

Want to run away
Can’t believe I’m still just here
Not moved since you pushed me away
Don’t know how long I’ll stay
Until it gets a little warmer
It’s just getting colder
Colder, alone
Someone help me home

Save me, SAVE ME PLEASE
No one stops to help
Watching faces pass before my eyes
People saying their goodbyes
Looking for me
Why don’t they come right here?
And save me
Its getting cold, Winters here
Getting colder
Save me, SAVE ME PLEASE

Frost is kicking in
The darkness has begun to fall
Can’t feel anymore
Except the pain I felt before
Sitting alone on the front door step
I don’t want a fuss
Just a bus
To take me home
Without a friend alone

Would you answer if I call?
Would you catch me if I fall?
Would you help me if I froze all night?
Would you stop me from walking into the light?
Would you help me home?
Would you stop me from being alone?

No one comes to help me
Think I’m drunk, drugged up
Thinking exactly what they see
I’d never be like what they think
If they knew, would they help?
Would they help me home?
Would they stop me from being alone?
SAVE ME PLEASE, SAVE ME PLEASE

Still on the step
No ones been by in an hour or two
All the lights have gone out
I really am without you
I can see a face
Telling me they’ll take me home
Telling me now, I’m not alone

Would you answer if I call?
Would you catch me if I fall?
Would you help me if I froze all night?
Would you stop me from walking into the light?
Would you help me home?
Would you stop me from being alone?

I can see a face
Light spreading around this place
No longer freezing all night
Being told to go into the light
Telling me it’s time to go to a new home
Telling me now I’ll never be alone

Towards the voice, I’m floating
Away from you
Up in the sky, I’m flying
No longer alone
A figure before my eyes
Crying, trying to pull me back down
Trying to save me
Stopping me from freezing in the night
Trying to stop me from walking into the light

Someone answered my call
Would you catch me if I fall?
Someone helped before I froze all night
But told me to start walking into the light
Someone helped me home
Someone stopped me from being alone

I want to feel as light as I do now
I want to keep escaping the cold night
I want to stop being alone
I want to see what’s behind that light

But what if I wake up?
What if I fell asleep?
What if it’s all a dream?
What if I’m still alone?

Please don’t open your door
Don’t find me
Please still hate me
If you see my face don’t help
Leave me on that front door step
Let me go home
I don’t want to be alone




Copyright © LucisLucy ... [ 2005-01-08 13:41:28]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravensfire on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:48:37 PM AEST
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WOW, very well thought out and written, my heart is full of emotions.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:51:15 PM AEST
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i dont see why people wait to be saved. they waste time, when they could do it themselves.


Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:47:28 PM AEST
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Salvation is for the needy at Christmas.




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