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Such an emotional girl with many colors of darkness
Such an egoless woman, reaching for survival.
Her sky is falling forever, but her cries have made me bleed.
She screams in terror, and her heart beats slowly.
Such a mortified girl, such a struggling one she is.
She wishes upon stars that never bother to help her.
She does her best to help people, but yet she can't help herself.
Such a confused girl, such a broken one.
Racing for her destiny, but failing under the black sea.
Everything's painful, or boring.
Everything's the same.
It's all alike.


We're not different, how can anyone be different?
She can't imagine how.
What a heartbroken girl, nothing but a wingless girl.
You can't breathe, no one can.
You can't find yourself, no one can.
Just let out all the yells you've been holding.
Don't hold back, we're all like this.
Those so-called "perfect" people don't know what they are saying.
They are all insecure, nothing more.
Your not alone, we're all with you.
I won't let you down.
Such a frozen girl, like a stone block she is.

Feel her fridged breaths, her silky hair.
She's so emotional, she's such a drama queen.
What a sad girl, nothing but her sadness ruling us all.
She's suffering, suffering herself into the pits of hell.
No one can compare themselves to her.
She's an angel, an angel of nothing but complete elegance.
It's her innocence, her renaissance.
What a crazy girl, such an eager one.
She won't rise up into the heavens.
No one can help her, she doesn't want the help.
She needs her heart, her eyes.
She's too hidden, she won't open her eyes.
She doesn't want to open them, it's the fear attacking her back.

Lord, please save her.
Don't let her fall, don't let her fail anymore.
Such a kind girl, the one who cries behind that sweet face.
It's all about the dark, all about the rain.
She's given up, given up everything.
What a insomniac girl, she needs her sleep.
She's such a girl, such a girl.
Nothing but a heartbroken,wingless angel girl!
Don't leave her, she needs to find herself.
When will she find herself?
Such a freaky girl, freaking out everyday.
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Such An Emotional Girl

Contributed by xFaLLeNxFaRiEx on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:25:39 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry






Such an emotional girl with many colors of darkness
Such an egoless woman, reaching for survival.
Her sky is falling forever, but her cries have made me bleed.
She screams in terror, and her heart beats slowly.
Such a mortified girl, such a struggling one she is.
She wishes upon stars that never bother to help her.
She does her best to help people, but yet she can't help herself.
Such a confused girl, such a broken one.
Racing for her destiny, but failing under the black sea.
Everything's painful, or boring.
Everything's the same.
It's all alike.


We're not different, how can anyone be different?
She can't imagine how.
What a heartbroken girl, nothing but a wingless girl.
You can't breathe, no one can.
You can't find yourself, no one can.
Just let out all the yells you've been holding.
Don't hold back, we're all like this.
Those so-called "perfect" people don't know what they are saying.
They are all insecure, nothing more.
Your not alone, we're all with you.
I won't let you down.
Such a frozen girl, like a stone block she is.

Feel her fridged breaths, her silky hair.
She's so emotional, she's such a drama queen.
What a sad girl, nothing but her sadness ruling us all.
She's suffering, suffering herself into the pits of hell.
No one can compare themselves to her.
She's an angel, an angel of nothing but complete elegance.
It's her innocence, her renaissance.
What a crazy girl, such an eager one.
She won't rise up into the heavens.
No one can help her, she doesn't want the help.
She needs her heart, her eyes.
She's too hidden, she won't open her eyes.
She doesn't want to open them, it's the fear attacking her back.

Lord, please save her.
Don't let her fall, don't let her fail anymore.
Such a kind girl, the one who cries behind that sweet face.
It's all about the dark, all about the rain.
She's given up, given up everything.
What a insomniac girl, she needs her sleep.
She's such a girl, such a girl.
Nothing but a heartbroken,wingless angel girl!
Don't leave her, she needs to find herself.
When will she find herself?
Such a freaky girl, freaking out everyday.
Such a emotional girl.




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Re: Such An Emotional Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:30:24 AM AEST
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wow that was really something, written with alot of emotion and feeling, great write, the pictures were amazing too
pixie xx


Re: Such An Emotional Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by xFaLLeNxFaRiEx on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 11:31:21 AM AEST
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::bows:: Thankyou, thankyou! ^.^


Re: Such An Emotional Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 02:05:37 PM AEST
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I loved the pictures also "she needs to hear she's beautiful"wow!,and I loved the poem just as much,great write


Re: Such An Emotional Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:12:29 PM AEST
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Your poem was really one I liked..Your subject and the flow of it kept up all very well..Good work,




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