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Array ( [sid] => 7896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => An Ocean Dream [time] => 2002-12-03 18:30:00 [hometext] => Written July 10, 1993 [bodytext] => Days go by
and nights fade away,
just thinking of you,
I dream of the day-

When we'll be together,
walking along the ocean shores,
the breeze blowing through my hair,
my hand held tightly in yours.

Our feet in the sand,
the stars shining bright,
the moon leading our way,
to the perfect night.

I had you for a week,
but that wasn't enough,
I miss being in your arms,
I miss the feel of you touch.

Dreams have held me over
for just a little while,
but I need to see your face again,
I miss that beautiful smile. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 502 [topic] => 24 [informant] => ShadowsCloud [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

An Ocean Dream

Contributed by ShadowsCloud on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 06:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

Days go by
and nights fade away,
just thinking of you,
I dream of the day-

When we'll be together,
walking along the ocean shores,
the breeze blowing through my hair,
my hand held tightly in yours.

Our feet in the sand,
the stars shining bright,
the moon leading our way,
to the perfect night.

I had you for a week,
but that wasn't enough,
I miss being in your arms,
I miss the feel of you touch.

Dreams have held me over
for just a little while,
but I need to see your face again,
I miss that beautiful smile.

Copyright © ShadowsCloud ... [ 2002-12-03 18:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An Ocean Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:16:18 PM AEST
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This is pretty. It paints a nice picture. I like it a lot.

~ MoonlitAngel

Re: An Ocean Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 06:52:58 PM AEST
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This is such a beautiful dream ....one of my dreams is to just be able to see the ocean which will come true for me in January of this next year....because i've never seen the ocean in person and someone offered to show it to me and im going to take that person up on the offer....Thanks for sharing this one i enjoyed it alot...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: An Ocean Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:35:12 PM AEST
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Another excellent early write of yours Candice,
You must've been born with the talent is all I can say!
Like we talked of before, your Mum did very well!

With love
Dean;-)

Re: An Ocean Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 09:40:55 PM AEST
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I'm glad that you like it. I think that I was born with my talent for both writing and sing I am very good at both, and I have my mom to thank for that. Not only are they also her talents but she has always encouraged me to do what I think is best.
ShadowsCloud

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