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Array ( [sid] => 78929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Statue Son [time] => 2005-01-07 20:51:58 [hometext] => okay enough whining about how much my ex is a @)#$*@# i'm back to writing poems that aren't all whiny and girly. XD [bodytext] => I am breathing hard
My muscles throb
This pain is bearable
But my head is not.
So unbelievable
yet Undeniable
What happened tonight
I will never condone.

Would you turn away
As you saw you best friend broken
By one you thought loved you
And you were in lust with?
A silver statue
Small and fragile
Painted with the blood of my son.

Do you choose your dignity
Or to give in to desire?

And my statue shakes in fury
At my stupidity
I drink deeply from his heart
He sits to watch me
Wanting to say something.
But he can't with his guilt,
He lies on the floor
And I watch from my high-backed chair

I stroke my silver statue
And soothe my son
Whom it is of
For because of my hatred
He is dead. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 59 [informant] => assassinatorgirl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )

Statue Son

Contributed by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:51:58 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

I am breathing hard
My muscles throb
This pain is bearable
But my head is not.
So unbelievable
yet Undeniable
What happened tonight
I will never condone.

Would you turn away
As you saw you best friend broken
By one you thought loved you
And you were in lust with?
A silver statue
Small and fragile
Painted with the blood of my son.

Do you choose your dignity
Or to give in to desire?

And my statue shakes in fury
At my stupidity
I drink deeply from his heart
He sits to watch me
Wanting to say something.
But he can't with his guilt,
He lies on the floor
And I watch from my high-backed chair

I stroke my silver statue
And soothe my son
Whom it is of
For because of my hatred
He is dead.

Copyright © assassinatorgirl ... [ 2005-01-07 20:51:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Statue Son (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:02:18 PM AEST
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Oh now this one I liked..I am so glad this is not some whiny bull***** poem..Thank You

Re: Statue Son (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 12:07:47 AM AEST
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excellent write. powerful and well written.

Re: Statue Son (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 10:06:46 PM AEST
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very powerfully written

Re: Statue Son (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 12:31:18 PM AEST
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Excelent.

Spazzo

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