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Thinking of life & what to do next,
Will I succeedd of will I fail?
Will I be sad of will happiness prevail?

To think for me can be a danger,
As to bad thoughts I am no stranger,
Alot of time I have to sit & think,
Sometimes my thoughts me on suicides brink.

If my mind didn't just sit & dwell,
It wouldn't often journey into hell,
Myabe it would go to a happier place & time,
A place where happiness was once & for all mine.

My thoughts are much darker at night,
Those are the times when I feel real fright,
The times when the rest of the world is sleeping,
& into my dark thoughts the devil is peeping.

An open mind which has no home,
Will live its days being very alone,
Wandering from here & then to there,
I have a mind which needs to be shown care.

If my mind feels no love or compassion,
Again & again will my hurt surely happen,
A wandering mind is just like a lost soul,
Never being able to settle & to never feel whole.

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Thinking Time

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 07:14:33 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Sat here with time to reflect,
Thinking of life & what to do next,
Will I succeedd of will I fail?
Will I be sad of will happiness prevail?

To think for me can be a danger,
As to bad thoughts I am no stranger,
Alot of time I have to sit & think,
Sometimes my thoughts me on suicides brink.

If my mind didn't just sit & dwell,
It wouldn't often journey into hell,
Myabe it would go to a happier place & time,
A place where happiness was once & for all mine.

My thoughts are much darker at night,
Those are the times when I feel real fright,
The times when the rest of the world is sleeping,
& into my dark thoughts the devil is peeping.

An open mind which has no home,
Will live its days being very alone,
Wandering from here & then to there,
I have a mind which needs to be shown care.

If my mind feels no love or compassion,
Again & again will my hurt surely happen,
A wandering mind is just like a lost soul,
Never being able to settle & to never feel whole.

Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-01-07 07:14:33]
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Re: Thinking Time (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 07:21:50 AM AEST
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Fantastic Pixie.

Thoughts can be soul destroying if you allow them to overtake your mind. We are in control of our minds so a few positive thoughts in between lift our spirits.

Can relate to this one written so well

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: Thinking Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 07:37:57 AM AEST
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I know what you mean, if you think about how the military does things, oh boy, thinking is not encouraged here!

AS far as artistic inergitry goes, this is great, a 5 star poem if I ever saw one, the rthym, the rhyme, it's all solid gold! Keep at it, I expect nothing less from a poet of your calabure.

Re: Thinking Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:08:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful and sad like a ballad or a tale majestically woven from a powerful mind, a poem painting a tapestry of emotions and dreams of thoughts and passion, strength I see and will to be something, your words are pure and from the heart, such magic is beatiful and wonderful two words that can never compare to to such a wonderful poet as yourself.

Take care

Mystery

Re: Thinking Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:57:51 AM AEST
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Dark and emotional,,,this is another fine write from the pen of pixie. ;o)
Very well done
Roses
Larry

Re: Thinking Time (User Rating: 1 )
by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:13:45 AM AEST
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A great poem, great rhythm pattern, each stanza is just perfect. Very emotional, I understand how you feel. If you ever need to tork add me on cutebutkinkylidevil@hotmail.com if u have msn or jst msg me.

Hope ur ok
Lots of Love Laura xxxx

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