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Array ( [sid] => 78807 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wasted For You [time] => 2005-01-06 22:48:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'd told you that you left an impression
but in truth you are my heart
Thats why everyday it kills me
to know that we are apart

As I write this poem
your voice fills my mind
I gave you everything I had
and then I was left behind

You played with my heart
You played with my life
Now I play our songs
as I play with the knife

You've seen the knife,
watched it cut before
I carve your name
to be reminded forever more

I gave you a nickname
I thought it fit well
Let me say this my butterfly
you will see me in hell

I cut deep
as I play our song
I'm on to someplace new
maybe there I will belong

My time here
which will soon be through
An entire life
has wasted on you [comments] => 4 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Wasted For You

Contributed by crash on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:48:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I'd told you that you left an impression
but in truth you are my heart
Thats why everyday it kills me
to know that we are apart

As I write this poem
your voice fills my mind
I gave you everything I had
and then I was left behind

You played with my heart
You played with my life
Now I play our songs
as I play with the knife

You've seen the knife,
watched it cut before
I carve your name
to be reminded forever more

I gave you a nickname
I thought it fit well
Let me say this my butterfly
you will see me in hell

I cut deep
as I play our song
I'm on to someplace new
maybe there I will belong

My time here
which will soon be through
An entire life
has wasted on you

Copyright © crash ... [ 2005-01-06 22:48:56]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Wasted For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:58:22 PM AEST
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brilliant write. well rhymed. well written. amazing to say the least. this reminded me of linkin park and staind, two of my favorite bands, also a plus. this was fully of emotion, power, and meaning. you conveyed all of them so well.

Re: Wasted For You (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 12:55:02 AM AEST
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very well written... let me say that time goes on so do hearts and lives, but i understand this so much ....great write

Re: Wasted For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:32:56 PM AEST
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OOO! Awesome. haha i love this so much. Its beautiful and powerful. I can feel your pain. I have been through it too. But just remember, he's not worth it. Don't do anything that you could regret. But very awesome poem. I really love it.

Re: Wasted For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos_is_apon_us on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:09:01 PM AEST
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Crash,
I'm sorry to hear that you have passed, and I must say, reading your peotry, it helps me cope with my reality. In thanks of your words, and in honor of your death, I will personally comment on all of your work.
Better dayz, R.I.P.
~jace~

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