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Array ( [sid] => 78791 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One Question [time] => 2005-01-06 21:10:54 [hometext] => keep the comments coming... [bodytext] => One Question

If i could ask God just one question it would definately be,
why does he have to take us and when will he take you and me.

If i had i chance to talk to God here is what i'd say,
why do the most important people always get taken away.

When i die i really want to now if it will hurt,
will my life flash befrore my eyes from then back to my birth.

Will i get the last chance to tell everyone just how much i love them,
and when i pass on will i ever see their faces again.

When i die will i die in the morning or in the night,
when i die will i see the great white light.

How do i know for sure that i am going to heaven,
and when i die how do i know that i'll get to see my grandma Helen.

I want to know will i die a slow and painful death,
or will i die nice and quietly in a dream at my rest.

God please answer me i have so many questions,
so many that half i haven't mentioned.

~Kay-Kay [comments] => 1 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kay-Kay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

One Question

Contributed by Kay-Kay on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:10:54 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

One Question

If i could ask God just one question it would definately be,
why does he have to take us and when will he take you and me.

If i had i chance to talk to God here is what i'd say,
why do the most important people always get taken away.

When i die i really want to now if it will hurt,
will my life flash befrore my eyes from then back to my birth.

Will i get the last chance to tell everyone just how much i love them,
and when i pass on will i ever see their faces again.

When i die will i die in the morning or in the night,
when i die will i see the great white light.

How do i know for sure that i am going to heaven,
and when i die how do i know that i'll get to see my grandma Helen.

I want to know will i die a slow and painful death,
or will i die nice and quietly in a dream at my rest.

God please answer me i have so many questions,
so many that half i haven't mentioned.

~Kay-Kay

Copyright © Kay-Kay ... [ 2005-01-06 21:10:54]
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Re: One Question (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:39:35 PM AEST
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well expressed, this is a very good poem! you should be proud of your work here, I would be

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