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Array ( [sid] => 78787 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Total Waste [time] => 2005-01-06 20:57:29 [hometext] => plz comment...... [bodytext] => Total Waste

You just put everything behind you right,
making my life even worse as day turns into night.

Not letting me tell you just how i feel,
this is so different it doesn't feel real.

What's the matter with us just how did this happen,
really all i ever heard was your jaw flappin'.

You changed so much in so little time,
that i wish life was a movie and i could rewind.

Saying that i love you was just a waste of my breath,
'cause now look at us we have nothing left.

I will never say sorry for anything i've done,
because if i did i'd be back at square one.

Back to all the arguing, fighting and more,
'till that one day when i threw all your things right out the door.

Well you think that i regret it and guess what i don't,
never will i think you regret it and i promise that i won't.

Even getting to know you has been a total waste,
i hope you leave soon i never want to see your face.

~Kay-Kay [comments] => 1 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Kay-Kay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Total Waste

Contributed by Kay-Kay on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:57:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Total Waste

You just put everything behind you right,
making my life even worse as day turns into night.

Not letting me tell you just how i feel,
this is so different it doesn't feel real.

What's the matter with us just how did this happen,
really all i ever heard was your jaw flappin'.

You changed so much in so little time,
that i wish life was a movie and i could rewind.

Saying that i love you was just a waste of my breath,
'cause now look at us we have nothing left.

I will never say sorry for anything i've done,
because if i did i'd be back at square one.

Back to all the arguing, fighting and more,
'till that one day when i threw all your things right out the door.

Well you think that i regret it and guess what i don't,
never will i think you regret it and i promise that i won't.

Even getting to know you has been a total waste,
i hope you leave soon i never want to see your face.

~Kay-Kay

Copyright © Kay-Kay ... [ 2005-01-06 20:57:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Total Waste (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:32:22 PM AEST
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your work is good enough to not ask for comments, it deserves the comments. lots of things are a waste, you just have to make up for them.

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