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Array ( [sid] => 7878 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ERIC [time] => 2002-12-03 09:30:00 [hometext] => This is an unfinished poem about a guy named eric who, turned out to be someone really different. [bodytext] => I'm starring at your face
feeling nothing there
wishing I was in a different place
because I no longer care

Now that I see the real you
I want a refund for the show
all that pain I went through
I guess I'll reap what I sew

I gave you my heart
but only as a friend
still you tore it apart
and threw it out in the end

I trusted your lies
because I thought them to be true
the truth brought me nothing but cries
and now i want it to be through. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 6 [informant] => TommyChick420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

ERIC

Contributed by TommyChick420 on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I'm starring at your face
feeling nothing there
wishing I was in a different place
because I no longer care

Now that I see the real you
I want a refund for the show
all that pain I went through
I guess I'll reap what I sew

I gave you my heart
but only as a friend
still you tore it apart
and threw it out in the end

I trusted your lies
because I thought them to be true
the truth brought me nothing but cries
and now i want it to be through.

Copyright © TommyChick420 ... [ 2002-12-03 09:30:00]
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Re: ERIC (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 09:58:39 AM AEST
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This is so sad, we think we know someone only to find out they are full of nothing but lies, i can say i've been here way to many times. It causes one not to trust and causes one to be cautious of everyone they meet, which is a very sad thing because everyone isn't like this yet they are already having to pay because of another person's pain that was inflicted upon us. I try real hard not to let what's happened in my past reflect upon the people that i get close to but it's hard at times...thanks for sharing this one i should stop here before i write a novel on it lol...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: ERIC (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:39:22 AM AEST
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sometimes too often there are hidden feelings behind someone,Good write! Christina

Re: ERIC (User Rating: 1 )
by me_n_me_alone on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 11:39:50 AM AEST
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I can relate to what you are saying. I once dated this guy who turned out to be nothing but lies.

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