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[aid] => mick
[title] => Mom
[time] => 2005-01-06 18:20:15
[hometext] => To my mother who has passed...
[bodytext] => Mom,
I miss you dearly. Everyday that I live and breath, its because I know you would want me to. I love you so much, you're always going to be in my thoughts and in my heart. I can't belive that you are really gone because it seems like only yesterday that you left for work and said you'd be home soon, but then whenever I was at Grandma and Grandpa's house whenever it was the morning that there was a knock on the door and it was the policeman telling Grandma and Grandpa that you ha dbeen shot and that you didn't make it in the hosptial. Whenever my step-dad Steve and Emily got there and he asked me if I was ready to go and I told him that you were going to pick me up, but he lied to me and told me that you were in a car accident and didn't make it, but I cried for so long because I always loved your hugs and kisses. I also enjoyed when I was with you because you made me the happiest daughter ever. Whenever you died I thought that it was all a dream and that when I woke up you would be here, but its real and 7 years later I still think that its all a dream and you'll come back, but I have to deal with the fact that your not coming back and its really hard Mom I really do miss you and I love you with every beat of my heart. I wish you were here with me today and somedays well most days I feel like there is no way that I could live without you and I feel like I can't go on anymore, but I know that you'd want me to. I Love you Mommy!
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Mom
Contributed by
whiteroses4u2005
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Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:20:15 PM in AEST
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Mom,
I miss you dearly. Everyday that I live and breath, its because I know you would want me to. I love you so much, you're always going to be in my thoughts and in my heart. I can't belive that you are really gone because it seems like only yesterday that you left for work and said you'd be home soon, but then whenever I was at Grandma and Grandpa's house whenever it was the morning that there was a knock on the door and it was the policeman telling Grandma and Grandpa that you ha dbeen shot and that you didn't make it in the hosptial. Whenever my step-dad Steve and Emily got there and he asked me if I was ready to go and I told him that you were going to pick me up, but he lied to me and told me that you were in a car accident and didn't make it, but I cried for so long because I always loved your hugs and kisses. I also enjoyed when I was with you because you made me the happiest daughter ever. Whenever you died I thought that it was all a dream and that when I woke up you would be here, but its real and 7 years later I still think that its all a dream and you'll come back, but I have to deal with the fact that your not coming back and its really hard Mom I really do miss you and I love you with every beat of my heart. I wish you were here with me today and somedays well most days I feel like there is no way that I could live without you and I feel like I can't go on anymore, but I know that you'd want me to. I Love you Mommy!
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Re: Mom
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by blossomingcherry5353 on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 06:34:43 PM AEST
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Wow! so much emotion in this poem.This is very sad and it made me a little teary eye'd. I know what it's like to lose someone so close to you that your sure that you can't go on with out that special someone. My special someone was my grandpa. Anyway back to the comment to your poem, this was very bueatiful, yet sad. I hope you keep on writing. Thanks for sharing that heartbreaking emotion with everyone on this site, it truley takes guts to write about something that made you feel like you did and still do.
thanks again for the bueatiful poem.
Shannon |
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Re: Mom
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 07:02:58 PM AEST
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| this was heart breaking brings back memories of my moms death 2 yrs. ago she didnt die from a gun shot it was a stroke,but anyways the loss of a parent is tragic I feel your pain ,if you need to talk pm me anytime.Great write by the way. |
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Re: Mom
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by pixie on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:46:56 AM AEST
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so moving and touching, must have took alot for you to write this, *hugs*
pixie xx |
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Re: Mom
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 07:32:39 AM AEST
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This brought a stream of tears flowing.
So very sad. I lost my mum 10 years ago now and the pain does get easier but you never stop missing them for they will live in our hearts forever.
I know she is with me and around me looking down on me and helping me through my life.
Believe that your mum would want you to be happy and for this mist to clear for you.
She is by your side. For a love so strong could never die.
Carry on in life and be happy for your mother would want only for you to remember the good times you shared.
((((HUGS))))
Lots of love sweetangelukxxxxx |
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