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Array ( [sid] => 78728 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => IF ONE DAY..... [time] => 2005-01-06 14:24:23 [hometext] => [bodytext] => IF ONE DAY U FEEL LIKE CRYING ,
C A L L M E ......
I DONT PROMISE U MAKE U LAUGH ,
B U T ....
I PROMISE TO CRY WITH U .

IF ONE DAY U DONT WANT TO LICEN ANYONE ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE I WILL BE THERE,
A N D ....
PROMISE TOO I WILL BE QUITE.

IF ONE DAY U WISH SOMETHING ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE TO FULFIL UR WISH.

IF ONE DAY U WANT SOMETHING FROM ME ,
C A L L M E .....
I DONT PROMISE TO REFUSE IT,
B U T .......
I PROMISE TO GIVE U CUZ MY ALL THINGS IS URS.

IF ONE THERE IS NO ONE TO LOVE U ,
C A L L M E ......
I DONT PROMISE TO DISHEART U ,
B U T .....
I PROMISE TO LOVE U .

IF ONE DAY U CALL ME ...
A N D ......
THERE IS NO ANSWER COME FAST TO SEE ME ,
CUZZZ I NEED U .

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IF ONE DAY.....

Contributed by backs_romeo on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:24:23 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

IF ONE DAY U FEEL LIKE CRYING ,
C A L L M E ......
I DONT PROMISE U MAKE U LAUGH ,
B U T ....
I PROMISE TO CRY WITH U .

IF ONE DAY U DONT WANT TO LICEN ANYONE ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE I WILL BE THERE,
A N D ....
PROMISE TOO I WILL BE QUITE.

IF ONE DAY U WISH SOMETHING ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE TO FULFIL UR WISH.

IF ONE DAY U WANT SOMETHING FROM ME ,
C A L L M E .....
I DONT PROMISE TO REFUSE IT,
B U T .......
I PROMISE TO GIVE U CUZ MY ALL THINGS IS URS.

IF ONE THERE IS NO ONE TO LOVE U ,
C A L L M E ......
I DONT PROMISE TO DISHEART U ,
B U T .....
I PROMISE TO LOVE U .

IF ONE DAY U CALL ME ...
A N D ......
THERE IS NO ANSWER COME FAST TO SEE ME ,
CUZZZ I NEED U .

Copyright © backs_romeo ... [ 2005-01-06 14:24:23]
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Re: IF ONE DAY..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:38:47 PM AEST
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First, no all caps stuff. Second, spell out "you." From there, it can only get better. Cheers!

Re: IF ONE DAY..... (User Rating: 1 )
by Pocket on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:40:02 PM AEST
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You might want to spell check! This poem doesn't really seem to convey any passion either.

Re: IF ONE DAY..... (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:53:49 PM AEST
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F ONE DAY U DONT WANT TO LICEN ANYONE ,
C A L L M E .....
I PROMISE I WILL BE THERE,
A N D ....
PROMISE TOO I WILL BE QUITE.

Is this the word "listen?..or ebonics..or what? and to not be loud is quiet.. sorry..I'm only trying to help...

Re: IF ONE DAY..... (User Rating: 1 )
by backs_romeo on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 08:46:34 AM AEST
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HEY I M BACKS ROMEO II USED SOME SHORT WORD SO PLZ SORRY IF U DONT LIKE IT
HEY PLZ VOTE MA POEM ALSO

Re: IF ONE DAY..... (User Rating: 1 )
by backs_romeo on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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YAAR THIS IS MY FIRST POEM N U GUYS REALLY DISHEARTED ME SO THAT I MAKEA PLAN TO NEVER WRITE A POEM AGAIN
BYE

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