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I love your freshness
Your smile your face
I love the very eccence of you
Where would I be without your hand
Here I am
Helpless as puddy
My hearts a mess
Those blue eyes melt my soul
Yet I stand
Here I am
Desire burns throught out and within
What have I done
I do not know
I love you and want to be your husband
Here I am
Love struck
Unloved
As a frosted moon your love is cold
In this abyss of hell stands a man
Here I am
Wanting only you
This fire engulffs my very heart
You turn your back and say
We travel to a beat of a different drum
Here I am
Wanting you
To live our lives
Together in happiness
Was that too much to demand

Sinned [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Sinned [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Here I Am

Contributed by Sinned on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:37:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Here I am
I love your freshness
Your smile your face
I love the very eccence of you
Where would I be without your hand
Here I am
Helpless as puddy
My hearts a mess
Those blue eyes melt my soul
Yet I stand
Here I am
Desire burns throught out and within
What have I done
I do not know
I love you and want to be your husband
Here I am
Love struck
Unloved
As a frosted moon your love is cold
In this abyss of hell stands a man
Here I am
Wanting only you
This fire engulffs my very heart
You turn your back and say
We travel to a beat of a different drum
Here I am
Wanting you
To live our lives
Together in happiness
Was that too much to demand

Sinned

Copyright © Sinned ... [ 2005-01-06 13:37:30]
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Re: Here I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:35:12 PM AEST
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Sigh... so sweet. If someone were to love my mother like that, it'd be good for her. But she would also refuse, darn her. Very emotionally powerful write. Cheers!

Re: Here I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by oxluvlaughingxo on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:30:23 PM AEST
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shows a lot of emotion. I really like it.

Re: Here I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:51:27 PM AEST
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A beautiful representation of what I am going through right now. It is quite confusing and hurtful isnt it. I feel pinned to these words:

Here I am
Wanting you
To live our lives
Together in happiness

Thank you for this piece its beautiful!

Re: Here I Am (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 11:14:58 PM AEST
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Very nice write..very painful...

Umang.

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