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Array ( [sid] => 78721 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Isolating To Tragedy [time] => 2005-01-06 13:29:00 [hometext] => 2704 [bodytext] => Its cold
Thats why he's here
To get away from all of it
To lose the thoughts
Emersed in white
That snowblind him
That blanket his mind
Freezing him senseless
Prying the truth out
One sentence
One fragment at a time
Until the brain collapses on itself
And the heart squeezes still
The entire foundation he made
Justifying his behavior
Shattered
Leaving him cold
Fragile
At the mercy of it

But he is here
Away from the thoughts
Injecting himself primal
Too dehumanized to care
The green slipping through his fingers
Buys it that way
His tongue saturated to a stupor
Mutes it that way
His eyes glazed with imperfections
Blinds it that way
His scatterbrained pretension
Keeps it that way
So that all he can do
Is think of nothing
But the present defect
Engulfing his abridged world
Isolating to tragedy
As he files one vice into another
Tucking it in
Caressing the skin
Breathing it
Glaring as it strolls away
They all do
Becoming a machine to him
Losing all individuality
Until "her" changes to "it"
Making him numb
Except to one
That one
That he can't get away from
That one
That reels him back everytime
That one
That refuses to change to "it"
Demanding
Screaming to be unique
Bending to it
Leaving him to cry
The tears he shed for it
His lost paradise
Frozen
Bleak
And it was right...
The one fact he can't accept
As it smiles
As he weeps [comments] => 5 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 22 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Isolating To Tragedy

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:29:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Its cold
Thats why he's here
To get away from all of it
To lose the thoughts
Emersed in white
That snowblind him
That blanket his mind
Freezing him senseless
Prying the truth out
One sentence
One fragment at a time
Until the brain collapses on itself
And the heart squeezes still
The entire foundation he made
Justifying his behavior
Shattered
Leaving him cold
Fragile
At the mercy of it

But he is here
Away from the thoughts
Injecting himself primal
Too dehumanized to care
The green slipping through his fingers
Buys it that way
His tongue saturated to a stupor
Mutes it that way
His eyes glazed with imperfections
Blinds it that way
His scatterbrained pretension
Keeps it that way
So that all he can do
Is think of nothing
But the present defect
Engulfing his abridged world
Isolating to tragedy
As he files one vice into another
Tucking it in
Caressing the skin
Breathing it
Glaring as it strolls away
They all do
Becoming a machine to him
Losing all individuality
Until "her" changes to "it"
Making him numb
Except to one
That one
That he can't get away from
That one
That reels him back everytime
That one
That refuses to change to "it"
Demanding
Screaming to be unique
Bending to it
Leaving him to cry
The tears he shed for it
His lost paradise
Frozen
Bleak
And it was right...
The one fact he can't accept
As it smiles
As he weeps

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2005-01-06 13:29:00]
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Re: Isolating To Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:34:21 PM AEST
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Very sad write. Another frozen heart I see. Wonderful expression of pain. Cheers!

Re: Isolating To Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by oxluvlaughingxo on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:25:50 PM AEST
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aww its soo sad. but it's soo good. i love it.

Re: Isolating To Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 03:54:41 PM AEST
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Incredible, I love the icey feel of the first stanza. Beautiful metaphors and descriptions. Truly an enchanting yet sorrowful poem

Re: Isolating To Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonOrgazm on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:07:12 AM AEST
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beautiful. makes me wanna give you a hug.

'Frozen
Bleak
And it was right...
The one fact he can't accept
As it smiles
As he weeps'

that was my favorite part.. i dunno why but it stood out from the rest of it.

Re: Isolating To Tragedy (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 11:36:08 PM AEST
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wonderful.

'Except to one
That one
That he can't get away from
That one
That reels him back everytime
That one
That refuses to change to "it"'

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