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As he stared out the window, a tear streamed down his cheek.
He couldn't keep it there he had to wipe it away, because a tear of pain is considered weak.
A guy is not supposed to cry, a guy was supposed to be strong.
But he was not just any guy, he was unique.
With his shoulder length black hair, and pale white skin, black around his eyes, and all his piercings, showing his pain.
Self inflicted piercings, of course hurt worse.
Picking up the blade and cutting again.
He would have been fine, he would have been okay.
But someone took his bleeding heart and ran away.
He made the final cut, and walked over to the bed.
Put his hands around her neck, and choked her until she was dead.
Her clawing hands tore at his bleeding wrists, as the blood dripped on her face she gasped for her last breath.
Death---Such a silence, he laid in the bed with her, staining the sheet as he bled to death.
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Self Inflicted

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:30:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

As he stared out the window, a tear streamed down his cheek.
He couldn't keep it there he had to wipe it away, because a tear of pain is considered weak.
A guy is not supposed to cry, a guy was supposed to be strong.
But he was not just any guy, he was unique.
With his shoulder length black hair, and pale white skin, black around his eyes, and all his piercings, showing his pain.
Self inflicted piercings, of course hurt worse.
Picking up the blade and cutting again.
He would have been fine, he would have been okay.
But someone took his bleeding heart and ran away.
He made the final cut, and walked over to the bed.
Put his hands around her neck, and choked her until she was dead.
Her clawing hands tore at his bleeding wrists, as the blood dripped on her face she gasped for her last breath.
Death---Such a silence, he laid in the bed with her, staining the sheet as he bled to death.

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2005-01-06 10:30:46]
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Re: Self Inflicted (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:45:06 AM AEST
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Interesting...Again don't know why i like it I just do.
Lauren

Re: Self Inflicted (User Rating: 1 )
by ERiN_BuRgEr on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:49:51 AM AEST
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Fu*kin hell.......now technically , it was brilliantgreat use of imagery , very powerful ...

and emotionally it was extremlly powerful ....... I got this sense of utter hopelessness from it.....And a lot of anger....

Youve definatly got a lot of talent though......definatly

PEACE

Re: Self Inflicted (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:40:42 AM AEST
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tHIS IS just more of the same really..Same type of words and subject matter,heard hundreds of times..Your a good writer,but this post lacks "life"

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