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I know you want me to stop.
I hear it in your words, the tone of your voice.
I know I'm weak, and because of that I cannot quit.
Maybe I am a little obessed with death, suicide...
I can't help that I'm f*cked up, I can't fix my bleeding heart.
I've tried to be okay, tried to act happy.
I asked for help, and they shove pills down my throat.
So maybe 51 is a little much...maybe I am obessed with cutting...
I'm sorry I can't be what you want...
Maybe I shouldn't be here at all...
Maybe I should make another gash to my skin...and make my very existence in life end...
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Broken Beauty

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:22:07 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I know you want me to stop.
I hear it in your words, the tone of your voice.
I know I'm weak, and because of that I cannot quit.
Maybe I am a little obessed with death, suicide...
I can't help that I'm f*cked up, I can't fix my bleeding heart.
I've tried to be okay, tried to act happy.
I asked for help, and they shove pills down my throat.
So maybe 51 is a little much...maybe I am obessed with cutting...
I'm sorry I can't be what you want...
Maybe I shouldn't be here at all...
Maybe I should make another gash to my skin...and make my very existence in life end...

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2005-01-06 10:22:07]
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Re: Broken Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:40:28 AM AEST
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I've tried to be okay, tried to act happy...I know how that goes... i really like this.I can't describe why but i do. very good.

Re: Broken Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by ERiN_BuRgEr on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:47:59 AM AEST
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Very well written , encapsulates the emotion of the piece perfectlly ...

cant say i enjoyed reading it though.....kinda reminds me of the sh*t i went through when i was a bit younger....Thats not to say , i know exactlly how u feel but i do know that Things will get better .....they will.....

PEACE

Re: Broken Beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:58:24 AM AEST
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great poem... i feel your pain. i made 63 cuts last night and i want to die... please dont die. i may sound like the bigest ***** hipocrite, but its just not worth it.
~take care~

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