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Array ( [sid] => 78688 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stuck in oblivion [time] => 2005-01-06 09:57:54 [hometext] => Adolescence has become too predictable. [bodytext] => Frowns bear down from every side
Cries of 'Why do I hurt inside?
Why does no one love me now?'
You just need to learn to see how
They discern you, pity your saddness;
But care and love for you no less
It's hard for them to stand by knowing
There's nothing to stop the blood from flowing
Teen angst, 'depression' stressed and skint
No stopper could ever plug that dint
Only time will lead you back to sanity
Out the pit veneered in anarchy
So hold on tight because it'll go fast
The futures waiting, possibilities vast [comments] => 3 [counter] => 243 [topic] => 21 [informant] => gherkin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Stuck in oblivion

Contributed by gherkin on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:57:54 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Frowns bear down from every side
Cries of 'Why do I hurt inside?
Why does no one love me now?'
You just need to learn to see how
They discern you, pity your saddness;
But care and love for you no less
It's hard for them to stand by knowing
There's nothing to stop the blood from flowing
Teen angst, 'depression' stressed and skint
No stopper could ever plug that dint
Only time will lead you back to sanity
Out the pit veneered in anarchy
So hold on tight because it'll go fast
The futures waiting, possibilities vast

Copyright © gherkin ... [ 2005-01-06 09:57:54]
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Re: Stuck in oblivion (User Rating: 1 )
by declinefoale on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:09:35 AM AEST
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I like this it's a really accurate description of how some kids act when they hit 14/15

Re: Stuck in oblivion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:21:44 AM AEST
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So true. Once they hit a certain age, the paths multiply into endless possibilities just like your last line. Good write and I hope the angsters read it. :-) Cheers!

Re: Stuck in oblivion (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:59:43 PM AEST
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i really liked reading this poem. it's right to the point. a very good write. well done
luv,
sue

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