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Array ( [sid] => 78656 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It Hurts Doesn't It? [time] => 2005-01-05 21:46:36 [hometext] => I'm sorry it's come to this...but trust me when I say I know what you're going through [bodytext] => It hurts doesn't it?
Having the one you love leave
Wanting to be with them
But knowing they'll only decieve
It cuts liek a knife
But never leaves a mark
And you're left feeling only pain
Crying alone in the dark
Your heart feels as if it were glass
Trampled and stepped upon
All alone you sit and cry
Clinging to pain, praying for dawn
Wishing you could turn back time
Hoping hen you wake you'll see their face
As if this had never happened
Like your life never fell from grace
Everyone tells you to hate them
But you don't have the heart to do it
I know this pain all too well
Because you made me go through it

And it hurts doesn't it? [comments] => 8 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

It Hurts Doesn't It?

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:46:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It hurts doesn't it?
Having the one you love leave
Wanting to be with them
But knowing they'll only decieve
It cuts liek a knife
But never leaves a mark
And you're left feeling only pain
Crying alone in the dark
Your heart feels as if it were glass
Trampled and stepped upon
All alone you sit and cry
Clinging to pain, praying for dawn
Wishing you could turn back time
Hoping hen you wake you'll see their face
As if this had never happened
Like your life never fell from grace
Everyone tells you to hate them
But you don't have the heart to do it
I know this pain all too well
Because you made me go through it

And it hurts doesn't it?

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-01-05 21:46:36]
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Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:50:12 PM AEST
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sorry 4 your pain kie a beautiful poem hope you feel better soon . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 01:43:00 AM AEST
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Kie good to see you back writing again, im sorry you had to go thru all this stuff. I hope to see more of you soon.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:41:36 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful, but sad poem.
.x.

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 09:41:19 AM AEST
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Oh gosh, sweetie. I feel every word of this, I truly do.
And what an ending. I too adore the last two lines.
Stay strong sweetie.
Love ya!
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:12:03 AM AEST
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Unfortunate inspiration, but what a write!!
The last few lines wrap it up perfectly!

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 04:28:25 PM AEST
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Oh how I know the feeling so well, it almost hurts to read the poem because its so very true. It does hurt ....

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by LostInLife on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 10:26:10 PM AEST
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I'm goin through this now, yeah it does hurt really bad. Good write.

Re: It Hurts Doesn't It? (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:18:30 AM AEST
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If only.... we can change some things.. great write.

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