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Array ( [sid] => 78627 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sinking [time] => 2005-01-05 19:19:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't know if I should cry or laugh
Do you realize I love you now to death
When no one else could make me smile
It made me happy that you were mine
I didn't have to hope then, I was in a dream
But nothing's ever as perfect as it may seem

I spent way too many nights thinking
If your love's an ocean, then I am sinking
You brought way too many tears to my eyes
And left me all alone with many unanswered whys
But it's ok, if you have to than go on
There's nothing worse staying where we don' t belong

Maybe it's stupid but at times I want you back
And it makes me crazy knowing that I can never have that
With everyday I only love you more
I'd rather be honest with myself than stay unsure
I didn't have to wish then, I was in a fantasy
But nothing's ever as perfect as it can be

I spent way too many nights thinking
If your love's an ocean, then I am sinking
You brought way too many tears to my eyes
And left me all alone with many unanswered whys
But it's ok, if you don't want me, have your space
Only know that I'll be missing you in many ways [comments] => 3 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 22 [informant] => New_York_Chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Sinking

Contributed by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I don't know if I should cry or laugh
Do you realize I love you now to death
When no one else could make me smile
It made me happy that you were mine
I didn't have to hope then, I was in a dream
But nothing's ever as perfect as it may seem

I spent way too many nights thinking
If your love's an ocean, then I am sinking
You brought way too many tears to my eyes
And left me all alone with many unanswered whys
But it's ok, if you have to than go on
There's nothing worse staying where we don' t belong

Maybe it's stupid but at times I want you back
And it makes me crazy knowing that I can never have that
With everyday I only love you more
I'd rather be honest with myself than stay unsure
I didn't have to wish then, I was in a fantasy
But nothing's ever as perfect as it can be

I spent way too many nights thinking
If your love's an ocean, then I am sinking
You brought way too many tears to my eyes
And left me all alone with many unanswered whys
But it's ok, if you don't want me, have your space
Only know that I'll be missing you in many ways




Copyright © New_York_Chick ... [ 2005-01-05 19:19:10]
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Re: Sinking (User Rating: 1 )
by broken_soul08 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:27:57 PM AEST
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I really like your poem, it has very nice voice and a good theme. This poem especially speaks to me because I know this feeling all too well. Great job!


Re: Sinking (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:15:03 PM AEST
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I love this so much. So so much. I cant even express...its perfect. Thank you


Re: Sinking (User Rating: 1 )
by prozac_memory on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 08:45:04 AM AEST
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omg i love this poem. beautiful, but sad
keep up the good writing.
.x.




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