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Array ( [sid] => 7862 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => pain is what i got [time] => 2002-12-03 01:30:00 [hometext] => "evil" [bodytext] => Blue and purple,
The colors of you,
Your smile, your hair,
Why I loved you I’ll never know,
But just the same,
That love was my sole,

Maybe an island for you and me,
A place where our love could be free,
Just you and me,

These visions tore my mind apart,
Just the same, caged my heart,
All I would love to do is make you smile,
Butt myself to that fact I put in denial,

I would scream just to talk to you,
Butt the words came blank and fell through,

I changed my life to try to suit,
what was it without you,
Butt it seemed you did not notice,
That was death and I was in rigormortis,

I tried to endure,
Thinking it was a test,

All I could think of was you,
And the visions would not stop,
Only way was to leave that spot,
And so I did to reclaim my life or what’s left,
Butt I still sometimes get depressed,
Its sad to say to this very day,
Butt in every way I wish now that I had not met you,

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 43 [informant] => plous [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

pain is what i got

Contributed by plous on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Blue and purple,
The colors of you,
Your smile, your hair,
Why I loved you I’ll never know,
But just the same,
That love was my sole,

Maybe an island for you and me,
A place where our love could be free,
Just you and me,

These visions tore my mind apart,
Just the same, caged my heart,
All I would love to do is make you smile,
Butt myself to that fact I put in denial,

I would scream just to talk to you,
Butt the words came blank and fell through,

I changed my life to try to suit,
what was it without you,
Butt it seemed you did not notice,
That was death and I was in rigormortis,

I tried to endure,
Thinking it was a test,

All I could think of was you,
And the visions would not stop,
Only way was to leave that spot,
And so I did to reclaim my life or what’s left,
Butt I still sometimes get depressed,
Its sad to say to this very day,
Butt in every way I wish now that I had not met you,

Copyright Â© plous ... [ 2002-12-03 01:30:00]
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Re: pain is what i got (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 01:39:32 AM AEST
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Pain is what you got indeed...this is so sad..it brought tears to my eyes...Beautiful...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: pain is what i got (User Rating: 1 )
by plous on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 08:07:27 PM AEST
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I try not to go into it to much, something everyone gets to go through, at least here i can get it of my cheast without my friends messing with me.

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