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Array ( [sid] => 78615 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I want to be your California girl [time] => 2005-01-05 18:08:33 [hometext] => This poem goes out to my lil hottie, Rachel. I still dont know if i will show her this poem and it is the only romantic poem i have ever written, whatcha think? [bodytext] => I want to see you smile
I want to wipe away your tears
I want to hold you close
I want to conquer all your fears.
I want to take you to Great America
I want to watch your rush on Drop Zone
I want you to never again feel alone
I want us to drive for days
Through the mountains under the warm sun
I want us to feel
That our adventure has just begun
I want to hold you
On the cliffs of Monterey
I want to feel
That you are here to stay.
I want to walk though the snow
At Yosemite
and then look into your eyes
And kiss you so passionately
I want to watch you sleep
as I lie awake
and watch your chest rise and fall
With each breath that you take
I want to tell you that I love you
As much as you can stand to hear it
And I want you to know
That I truly mean it.
I want to be with you
Night and day
I want the sun to kiss our cheeks
As we over look the bay.
I want us to last forever
And forever again in a repetitive swirl
I want to be
Your California Girl. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Riot_Girl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
I want to be your California girl

Contributed by Riot_Girl on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:08:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I want to see you smile
I want to wipe away your tears
I want to hold you close
I want to conquer all your fears.
I want to take you to Great America
I want to watch your rush on Drop Zone
I want you to never again feel alone
I want us to drive for days
Through the mountains under the warm sun
I want us to feel
That our adventure has just begun
I want to hold you
On the cliffs of Monterey
I want to feel
That you are here to stay.
I want to walk though the snow
At Yosemite
and then look into your eyes
And kiss you so passionately
I want to watch you sleep
as I lie awake
and watch your chest rise and fall
With each breath that you take
I want to tell you that I love you
As much as you can stand to hear it
And I want you to know
That I truly mean it.
I want to be with you
Night and day
I want the sun to kiss our cheeks
As we over look the bay.
I want us to last forever
And forever again in a repetitive swirl
I want to be
Your California Girl.




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Re: I want to be your California girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:12:13 PM AEST
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I can relate to this TONS, watch your cliches in the first four lines though. Other than that it is very well written... thanks!


Re: I want to be your California girl (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:01:30 PM AEST
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Word usage is a bit odd in this one..The poem is alright..Not bad..Minor problems that bother me as to my background with English and what not..Other then that eh..It is alright


Re: I want to be your California girl (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:11:39 AM AEST
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wow, this is such a romantic write! well done and i LOve ur word usage......brilliant........u r a good poet




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