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when they tell you the news
that you will never see your friend
though you already knew
it would come to this
but you never believed this soon

what do you do
when they tell you the news
that the one you love is gone
in the brightened world
of the lightened soul
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Gone

Contributed by me_n_me_alone on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

what do you do
when they tell you the news
that you will never see your friend
though you already knew
it would come to this
but you never believed this soon

what do you do
when they tell you the news
that the one you love is gone
in the brightened world
of the lightened soul
all sorrow strung past dawn

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 12:47:14 AM AEST
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Well hmm...not sure what one does coz im not in this situation but i do beleive that the only thing you can possibly do for this person is be there for them all you can...You can't tell them that they need help and they need to do or need to get or need to do this and that because that's definately the last thing this person needs to hear.....but just to sit with them, hold there hand...let them know that you care....that will help them more than you know.....If this person is already gone??? then my heart goes out to you .....i always beleive one should give all of their heart in everything they do ....because i for one dont want to live with any regrets...and i can honestly say to this day that because i have followed my heart in life.....that i have none...Bless you...

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Re: Gone (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 3rd December 2002 @ 10:50:13 AM AEST
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I know one person who has done this & yes it was very hard! They sometimes dont realize what they leave behind! Some do this not reaalizing that their problems were not really oh so bad & could have been helped! Christina

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