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Array ( [sid] => 78597 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I dont derserve you [time] => 2005-01-05 16:08:08 [hometext] => Its not exactly lost love...cuz i havent lost him, but I feel as tho i should sometimes. I try to ***** him off all the time, i feel soo *****ty! v.v [bodytext] => I dont deserve you
You're the best and I just suck
You remeber everything I say and I just dont give a *****
When I'm mad, I'll try to push you just to see how much it'll take
Trying to push you to the point where you wanna break
But you never do,
You've never done anything to deserve what I put you through
I push you Just to get a rise
But you never get *****, your emotions hide.
I qestion your love and stomp on your dreams
You can do better than me it seems
YOu love me unconditionaly and I do too
But my love is hurting you.
YOu never get to see each other and i dunno what to do
Your heart is breaking and I am too
But still you say " I wanna be with you"
It hurts more than you think it does..
I dunno why...just because
I never have answers for what you ask me, I know
You know where we met and our first conversation..so
Just because I dont remember it doesnt me i dont care
I'll try my best to always be there
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 438 [topic] => 22 [informant] => MaRy_JaNe_420 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I dont derserve you

Contributed by MaRy_JaNe_420 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:08:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I dont deserve you
You're the best and I just suck
You remeber everything I say and I just dont give a *****
When I'm mad, I'll try to push you just to see how much it'll take
Trying to push you to the point where you wanna break
But you never do,
You've never done anything to deserve what I put you through
I push you Just to get a rise
But you never get *****, your emotions hide.
I qestion your love and stomp on your dreams
You can do better than me it seems
YOu love me unconditionaly and I do too
But my love is hurting you.
YOu never get to see each other and i dunno what to do
Your heart is breaking and I am too
But still you say " I wanna be with you"
It hurts more than you think it does..
I dunno why...just because
I never have answers for what you ask me, I know
You know where we met and our first conversation..so
Just because I dont remember it doesnt me i dont care
I'll try my best to always be there




Copyright © MaRy_JaNe_420 ... [ 2005-01-05 16:08:08]
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Re: I dont derserve you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:19:17 PM AEST
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Oh....it's so sad......best of luck....I'm happy that he's so patient, it'll come in handy.
Magnificent write!


Re: I dont derserve you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:49:18 PM AEST
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Very moving write and unconditional luv is scarry but u need to learn to luv yourself.
U gotta reach inside and find what it is that he luvs so much and go with it.
I know how it is when another person destroys my self convidense in the name of luv.
Loosen up and go with it. I've had a few times while younger got scared and run from luv. Now I live alone but enjoy it for the most part. Don't let someone's mess make u feel like u don't deserve'cause we all need and deserve not but un conditional luv.
Sorry didn't mean to write a book.
Hang in there.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy




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