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Array ( [sid] => 78573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Wanna Die [time] => 2005-01-05 12:53:55 [hometext] => This is something that really happened to me [bodytext] => She looks around
The place is empty
The knife she holds
It's getting heavier

She has no one who cares
No one with who she can share
Her feelings, her pain
This truth is driving her insane

She looks at the knife again
Bringing it close to her skin
It's almost touching her
In this battle she can't win

She looks around again
Till she sees a picture
Her parents laughing
She sits between them

She gets angry at herself
One last look at the knife
Before she throws it far away
She doesn't want to die [comments] => 4 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Lostinside [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Don't Wanna Die

Contributed by Lostinside on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:53:55 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

She looks around
The place is empty
The knife she holds
It's getting heavier

She has no one who cares
No one with who she can share
Her feelings, her pain
This truth is driving her insane

She looks at the knife again
Bringing it close to her skin
It's almost touching her
In this battle she can't win

She looks around again
Till she sees a picture
Her parents laughing
She sits between them

She gets angry at herself
One last look at the knife
Before she throws it far away
She doesn't want to die

Copyright © Lostinside ... [ 2005-01-05 12:53:55]
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Re: Don't Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:09:58 PM AEST
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Poems about personal experiences are often the best. This one sounds so sincwere.

Re: Don't Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:55:51 PM AEST
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sad, but well written. it has alot of meaning.
cheers,
sue
xxx

Re: Don't Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:07:59 PM AEST
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now this was good,I loved the ending

Re: Don't Wanna Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Mandy2007 on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 09:36:48 PM AEST
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This poem is awsome! It makes people realize some people are lucky and able to be pulled out of the feeling before doing it. Such as her, when she saw the picture, she realized she didn't want to die, she had peopel that cared.

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