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Array ( [sid] => 78565 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lustful Blood [time] => 2005-01-05 12:04:47 [hometext] => Well, it's been a year and a half and now I wonder if I should edit this, add stanzas .... [bodytext] => C’mere, so that I might
Drink from thee. Bare thy
Neck to these lips, for they
Hide what lies beneath,
Sharp, pointy things
In which I might break
Such fragile skin and feed.
Let me taste thy escense,
Flowing red and free
Across mine tongue.
Nourish me with thy life,
Grant me serenity within
An embrace of death,
Quicken me now, I plead.
Grant me companionship,
This eternal Hell, I can no
Longer bear alone. I bare my
Soul to thee, in one sweet
Kiss of Death. Become one
With me, this night, as we
Partake in such carnal delight.
I need to feel thee, taste thee,
Merge with thee. Be mine in
Death! So that I shant walk
Alone for eternity.

20 June 2003 [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 13 [informant] => taintedsoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Lustful Blood

Contributed by taintedsoul on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:04:47 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

C’mere, so that I might
Drink from thee. Bare thy
Neck to these lips, for they
Hide what lies beneath,
Sharp, pointy things
In which I might break
Such fragile skin and feed.
Let me taste thy escense,
Flowing red and free
Across mine tongue.
Nourish me with thy life,
Grant me serenity within
An embrace of death,
Quicken me now, I plead.
Grant me companionship,
This eternal Hell, I can no
Longer bear alone. I bare my
Soul to thee, in one sweet
Kiss of Death. Become one
With me, this night, as we
Partake in such carnal delight.
I need to feel thee, taste thee,
Merge with thee. Be mine in
Death! So that I shant walk
Alone for eternity.

20 June 2003

Copyright Â© taintedsoul ... [ 2005-01-05 12:04:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lustful Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:07:45 PM AEST
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i think that's a perfect dark write, really good
pixie xx

Re: Lustful Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by gherkin on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:11:49 PM AEST
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It takes a hell of alot of skill to be able to write so freely, and be able to cover a brief encounter in such depth and feeling; and all without repeating yourself.
Impressed and wanting more
Gherkin
x

Re: Lustful Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:47:48 PM AEST
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An interesting view of a vampires pov. Well written. Loved it.

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