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Only skeletons hold your hand,
Demons that come from your past,
Only their friendship will last.

They torment as you fall,
Laugh & drown out your call,
They would dance on your grave,
Kill you leave nothing left to save.

Loneliness lives in all our hearts,
Only to cry makes the process start,
Once it’s begun you can not stop,
Until it has drained your every drop.

This land is one to be greatly feared,
This is one that you don’t want near,
But it lives on as we all die,
It is the only thing that makes us all cry.

When darkness falls all around,
It is so quiet you can’t hear a sound,
There’s no-one there to hear your screams,
Only horrors to dissect what were once dreams
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In This Dark Land

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:29:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In this dark land,
Only skeletons hold your hand,
Demons that come from your past,
Only their friendship will last.

They torment as you fall,
Laugh & drown out your call,
They would dance on your grave,
Kill you leave nothing left to save.

Loneliness lives in all our hearts,
Only to cry makes the process start,
Once it’s begun you can not stop,
Until it has drained your every drop.

This land is one to be greatly feared,
This is one that you don’t want near,
But it lives on as we all die,
It is the only thing that makes us all cry.

When darkness falls all around,
It is so quiet you can’t hear a sound,
There’s no-one there to hear your screams,
Only horrors to dissect what were once dreams

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2005-01-05 10:29:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: In This Dark Land (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:42:18 AM AEST
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I've missed your poetry over christmas, I really have.
Escpecially your darker writes.
This is fantastic, I have no idea how you write so well.
Thanks for sharing this, Krissie.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: In This Dark Land (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 10:44:14 AM AEST
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grabbed me in the beginning and didnt let go till the end.very good

Re: In This Dark Land (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:34:53 AM AEST
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Very good write

Re: In This Dark Land (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:23:21 PM AEST
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This was bloody awesome. I loved the
darkness and sense of hopelessness in this
one I know it all to well. I think the first two
lines and the last two were my favourite, but it
was all awesome. Kudos on a great write.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: In This Dark Land (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 6th January 2005 @ 02:34:05 AM AEST
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Damn was this good or what, Kriss this was so good i missed your dark writes. Fab poetry at its best.

Hugs,
Jane x

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