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In a room without walls
She sits and she cries
While a part of her dies
Empty and broken
Soulless emotions
Do run through her head
The happiness long dead

You made her this monster
This person that's not her
You unknowingly broke her heart
Now torn apart
This nothingness being
Her loving, your deceiving

You didn't say I love you
She thought love meant you didn't have to
Treated her like dirt
Now all she feels is hurt
You didn't care
How could you not hear
Her mind in such strife
You didn't hear her snap when you took her life
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closed doors and bleeding hearts

Contributed by surge_joebot on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:40:48 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Behind closed doors
In a room without walls
She sits and she cries
While a part of her dies
Empty and broken
Soulless emotions
Do run through her head
The happiness long dead

You made her this monster
This person that's not her
You unknowingly broke her heart
Now torn apart
This nothingness being
Her loving, your deceiving

You didn't say I love you
She thought love meant you didn't have to
Treated her like dirt
Now all she feels is hurt
You didn't care
How could you not hear
Her mind in such strife
You didn't hear her snap when you took her life

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2005-01-05 02:40:48]
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Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:23:47 AM AEST
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nice write, i like the feeling very much

l8r

Ninja Tycz

Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:59:28 AM AEST
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Very good writing my friend. It's sad but true so many times.
huggs, luv,
emy

Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 07:24:47 AM AEST
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I could feel the anger in your words...people can be animals sometimes.

very well done
Larry

Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by SMG on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:45:26 AM AEST
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this is something worthy to read

Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty_cat on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:47:34 AM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. I especially like 'Behind closed doors in a room without walls'.

take care

cat xx

Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 11:20:53 AM AEST
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This really cried out to me. I love it.
Especially this:

Behind closed doors
In a room without walls
She sits and she cries
While a part of her dies
Empty and broken
Soulless emotions
Do run through her head
The happiness long dead

I absolutley adore it. It's fantastic.
The rhyme and everything is just perfect.

Keep it up.
*huggies* Phil xxx

Re: closed doors and bleeding hearts (User Rating: 1 )
by hot-shot on Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 01:22:34 PM AEST
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hey dud u hav written very well & wonderfully....it made me sad abt da tergdy..&...lose...but no 1 can change the destny.....
anyway hav fun & hugzzzzzzzzz
hot-shot

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