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but what about a heart
As I watched you walk away
I knew we'd be forever apart

I dropped to the ground
And the tears rolled down my cheeks
I tried to tell myself to get over you
But I knew then it would be weeks.

You went away for a week one time
We didnt know if we'd cope
you gave me a silver cd full of love songs
The words "I Love you Megan" gave me hope

Now I look at those cds you gave me
They're scratched and sound so bad
I took them with me everywhere,
Now they just make me sad

I see you at this party,
I'm holding back the tears
You're hanging on the stupid *****,
Proving my worst fears

Some day you'll dump her as well,
You dont give the slightest ****
Youre the best at breaking hearts,
But why can't you just commit?

You're heartless, cruel, and ugly inside,
But outside youre so hot,
Everything is perfect from far away,
Perfect's what you're not. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 281 [topic] => 43 [informant] => meganloberg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Boys Suck

Contributed by meganloberg on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:49:02 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

A broken limb is easy to mend
but what about a heart
As I watched you walk away
I knew we'd be forever apart

I dropped to the ground
And the tears rolled down my cheeks
I tried to tell myself to get over you
But I knew then it would be weeks.

You went away for a week one time
We didnt know if we'd cope
you gave me a silver cd full of love songs
The words "I Love you Megan" gave me hope

Now I look at those cds you gave me
They're scratched and sound so bad
I took them with me everywhere,
Now they just make me sad

I see you at this party,
I'm holding back the tears
You're hanging on the stupid *****,
Proving my worst fears

Some day you'll dump her as well,
You dont give the slightest ****
Youre the best at breaking hearts,
But why can't you just commit?

You're heartless, cruel, and ugly inside,
But outside youre so hot,
Everything is perfect from far away,
Perfect's what you're not.

Copyright © meganloberg ... [ 2005-01-05 00:49:02]
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Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:52:41 AM AEST
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Great write! I can absolutely relate to this lately.
And yes, boys do suck sometimes.
I wish you the best. :-)

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:36:19 AM AEST
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good poem, youre right, guys do suck.

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:37:03 AM AEST
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yes it does suck that he did this to you but in the end what comes around goes around and he wil get bit right in his arssssss believe me. Wipe your tears girl your better than him!

Michelle

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:25:26 AM AEST
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I think that using a generalisation for a title is only a good idea if you are to play on said generalisation, or poke fun at it in some way. This is bitter, for sure, but the ending is a little strange. I think it should read;

"Everything is so far from perfect,
In everything that you've got"

Bad grammar there in the attempt to rhyme, but I think it makes more sense. And of course, both sexes are as guilty as one another across the histories - and as a guy, I'm saying there's more good than bad out there . . .

Good luck.

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by meganloberg on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:19:51 AM AEST
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Sorry then. ONLY SOME BOYS SUCK.

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 08:34:10 AM AEST
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Lol boys arent that bad you just have to meet the right one, good poem tho.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 03:48:37 PM AEST
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Once, I met this lawyer and he was so hot to look at..he took me to coffee and all he did was talk about himself..man..looks are nothing really.. wipe your tears and find someone with something going on inside..

Re: Boys Suck (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:13:53 PM AEST
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His loss babe! Great poem though. Oh and not ALL of them suck...but A lot of them do.

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