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Array ( [sid] => 78523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I say I love you [time] => 2005-01-05 00:28:14 [hometext] => Not my favorite, but it holds a place in my heart. [bodytext] => If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?

Tumbled down, back to this land of family and love.
You hover above us, looking down with glassy eyes.
You stare at us like we aren’t real, blinking your eyes and walking away.
We are your robots, we don’t feel, I can see it in your eyes.
Wipe that thought away come back here.

If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?

As I watch, you pretending you don’t hear
I understand you will never know what this does.
Look at the faces of your children
They beg and plead for you to come with them
But you just stare forward and leave them.

If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?

I’ll stay right where I am, even if you don’t see.
So I will wait until the day you come back.
One day there will be a spark in your soul
And I will know my love has returned to me.

If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?
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If I say I love you

Contributed by SlimStaple on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:28:14 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?

Tumbled down, back to this land of family and love.
You hover above us, looking down with glassy eyes.
You stare at us like we aren’t real, blinking your eyes and walking away.
We are your robots, we don’t feel, I can see it in your eyes.
Wipe that thought away come back here.

If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?

As I watch, you pretending you don’t hear
I understand you will never know what this does.
Look at the faces of your children
They beg and plead for you to come with them
But you just stare forward and leave them.

If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?

I’ll stay right where I am, even if you don’t see.
So I will wait until the day you come back.
One day there will be a spark in your soul
And I will know my love has returned to me.

If I sit beside you and hold your hand
Will you feel my warmth?
If I whisper in your ear that I love you
Will you be able to hear?




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Re: If I say I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:37:52 AM AEST
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Very sweet and touching write.
Wonderful work.


Re: If I say I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 01:09:20 AM AEST
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This is so sad but written well.
I know it must be hard what ever the medical condition is.
Hang tuff and keep the faith.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: If I say I love you (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:33:57 AM AEST
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very sad, i hope things get better. chin up
all the best,
sue




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