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Array ( [sid] => 78509 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hostile [time] => 2005-01-04 22:40:35 [hometext] => i suppose the title is a bit misleading [bodytext] => hostile
because no one understands you
the world just doesn't care
and each day it's just more obvious
that you're not as good as others

hostile
because everything you have
you've had to fight for
nothing free or easy
just battles that never feel won
and enemies that never get what they deserve

seething
you can see that you two
were meant for one another
but he doesn't see the same
truth is, he doesn't see you at all
he doesn't know you're alive
too busy with that airhead blonde
with the big tits and bad make-up
loneliness is not a feeling
it's a sickness
and it's eating you alive

you didn't choose your friends
just tossed together by fate and social class
the losers have to stick together
and as it gets tougher
(and it will)
most of them won't be there for you at all

the make-up you wear
in your room when no one is home
doesn't make you pretty at all
just emphasis on your plainness
a highlighter on a fragmented sentence

hostile
you're all alone and you know it
tomorrow won't be better
just a dirty reflection of today
no one will ever know or love
the beauty inside you
because you've buried it beneath
an anger that only grows
and you can't even slit your wrists to get away
because then "they'd" win
and you'll never let that happen
so you just keep existing
sinking deeper each day
and by the time someone comes
who you just can't chase away
the curtains will close on this tragedy
when the happy ending finally comes
just a little too late
for a heart that only wanted love
now imprisoned, forever
in hate [comments] => 5 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

hostile

Contributed by Cancer on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:40:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

hostile
because no one understands you
the world just doesn't care
and each day it's just more obvious
that you're not as good as others

hostile
because everything you have
you've had to fight for
nothing free or easy
just battles that never feel won
and enemies that never get what they deserve

seething
you can see that you two
were meant for one another
but he doesn't see the same
truth is, he doesn't see you at all
he doesn't know you're alive
too busy with that airhead blonde
with the big tits and bad make-up
loneliness is not a feeling
it's a sickness
and it's eating you alive

you didn't choose your friends
just tossed together by fate and social class
the losers have to stick together
and as it gets tougher
(and it will)
most of them won't be there for you at all

the make-up you wear
in your room when no one is home
doesn't make you pretty at all
just emphasis on your plainness
a highlighter on a fragmented sentence

hostile
you're all alone and you know it
tomorrow won't be better
just a dirty reflection of today
no one will ever know or love
the beauty inside you
because you've buried it beneath
an anger that only grows
and you can't even slit your wrists to get away
because then "they'd" win
and you'll never let that happen
so you just keep existing
sinking deeper each day
and by the time someone comes
who you just can't chase away
the curtains will close on this tragedy
when the happy ending finally comes
just a little too late
for a heart that only wanted love
now imprisoned, forever
in hate

Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2005-01-04 22:40:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: hostile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:53:24 PM AEST
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One word,AMAZING.I enjoyed it soo much I read it twice.

Re: hostile (User Rating: 1 )
by shamateur on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:56:48 PM AEST
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You know what, I can really relate....Good job

Re: hostile (User Rating: 1 )
by blacksabbath026 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 11:58:04 PM AEST
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Sadly to say thats the way people are, we naturally put everyone into groups, we are all racist, shallow and arrogant. the only thing you can do about it is to try to make as many freinds as you can and if you can t make any you can do what i do and listen to metal all day..... good poem though very well expressed

Re: hostile (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 05:07:03 PM AEST
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Man, I read this poem and I thought it was great, but then I read the comments and I couldn't stop laughing.
I don't know about lovely29, but its pretty much mandatory to read your work at least twice to soak it in. So, I thought that was blunt and amusing.
However, blacksabbath026's comment on having no friends and listening to old 70s metal all day shotgunned a mental image in my mind that tickled me brainless.
Oh............ maybe I'm an ass... or just really ***** up..... hell, whatever.
Anyway, great write.

Re: hostile (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:26:40 PM AEST
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ahh what a sad poem the last stanza I have
found to be very true. A very good and a very
honest, heartbreaking poem.
"loneliness is not a feeling
it's a sickness
and it's eating you alive"

Bobo (Joel)

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