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Array ( [sid] => 78488 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Make It Big [time] => 2005-01-04 20:04:17 [hometext] => From the surreal opera poems The Unconscious Excursions of No Fuss Gus. [bodytext] => No Fuss Gus:

What would I say
If I had to say it again?
Knowing then,
That life wasn't just pretend

Sylvia:

You'd better
Make it big
Before the moment dies
I can see
How the sapphire beams
In your eyes

No Fuss Gus:

The marksman has a choice
He has an aim to which he wills
Sylvia knows the name of her fame,
She just hopes it doesn't get killed

Harietta:

Why can't you be like those other guys?
Just for once don't smother me, guy

Sylvia:

You'd better
Make it big
Before the moment dies
O can't you see
How the sapphire beams
In my eyes? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Lee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Make It Big

Contributed by Lee on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

No Fuss Gus:

What would I say
If I had to say it again?
Knowing then,
That life wasn't just pretend

Sylvia:

You'd better
Make it big
Before the moment dies
I can see
How the sapphire beams
In your eyes

No Fuss Gus:

The marksman has a choice
He has an aim to which he wills
Sylvia knows the name of her fame,
She just hopes it doesn't get killed

Harietta:

Why can't you be like those other guys?
Just for once don't smother me, guy

Sylvia:

You'd better
Make it big
Before the moment dies
O can't you see
How the sapphire beams
In my eyes?

Copyright © Lee ... [ 2005-01-04 20:04:17]
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Re: Make It Big (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:44:03 PM AEST
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cool

Re: Make It Big (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 09:37:11 PM AEST
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amazing.

Re: Make It Big (User Rating: 1 )
by Lee on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 08:06:24 PM AEST
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"Just Passing Through the Universe"
Collection 3 of 3 in the Space-age Poetry Series

"Make it Big"

O babe
What would I say
If I had to say it again?
Knowing then
That life was not just pretend

You had better
Make it big
Before the moment dies
I can see
The sapphire star-beams
Dwelling in your eyes

The marksman has a choice
He has an aim to which he wills
The Queen of the Moon knows
The name of her fame
She just hopes it does not get killed

Why can't you be like those other guys?
Just for once don't smother me, guy

You'd better
Make it big
Before the moment dies
O can't you see
The wandering moondust
Bring tears to my eyes?

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