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Venom

Contributed by KurdtBeantheWIKKED on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:03:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



So lately I’ve been forced to awaken
From my hibernation
When I opened my eyes the world had shifted
I became suicidal, and I don’t understand it
Everything turned and I was blind
I could not see to my right, and she cries
Oh I still remember, her first tear
It was movie magic, it had everything you ever wanted
But then
The moon smiled at me, it had to end there
The burial was to the west
Black pearl charcoal rocks lined the grave
“Six feet under would be bliss” I said
Her silence was the answer to his rejection
This Femme-fatal predator moved about so subtle
I watched and waited for her first move
If she desacralized his grave
The fury I would bring
And so what if he’s on his own
its not like he ever took notice

And I’m just so sad, it keeps getting colder
Hot led seems so appetizing today
I don’t know what I want
But I know what I need
I need to be at peace
Everyday is a new contuse
It’s a legacy, passed down through the blood
Answerless questions, does she make a sound?

“¿Sabe Abuela? Un dia me dieron
A probar de su sangre en un altar
Y aprendí como la historia
A remediar la simple esencia de pensar”




Copyright © KurdtBeantheWIKKED ... [ 2005-01-04 19:03:18]
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Re: Venom (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 02:24:40 AM AEST
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Im sorry for your loss its something that is hard to go through I know how you feel I just lost someone close to me recently as well. We have to pick up and move on though its hard I understand how you feel believe me I do
Michelle


Re: Venom (User Rating: 1 )
by AtomIcPromIse on Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:50:50 PM AEST
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I really like your words-it's sounds really cool.


Re: Venom (User Rating: 1 )
by russ-dawg on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 12:15:44 AM AEST
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though sad a very good write i know you will carry on and your friend will watch over you!




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