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a few simple words
Contributed by
kRaZyChIcKo9
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Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:43:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a few simple words could make someone cry
a few simple words could make someone want to die
but words are just words no matter how hard you try
you cant make a word as real as the sky or the seas
so now you see a few simple words are a simple a these
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2005-01-04 18:43:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: a few simple words
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetmarie on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:52:47 PM AEST (User
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That must have been hard. I like the simplicity of this poem. |
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Re: a few simple words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:42:58 PM AEST (User
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I really like the last line. |
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Re: a few simple words
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:43:44 PM AEST (User
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or last 'lines' |
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Re: a few simple words
(User Rating: 1 ) by New_York_Chick on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 08:25:26 PM AEST (User
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it is good
awesome write |
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Re: a few simple words
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 02:34:01 PM AEST (User
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It's an awesome poem... I too like the simplicity of it. It's good and u r a good writer. Don't let anyone try to tell u different!
Take care...
~Donna~ |
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