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In the fogging rain.
On your way back from service.
You lied at me expense.
Left me in the utter past tense.
Lieing, it must be one of your famous faces.
The one thats one day.
Leaving you feeling awkward in some place strange.

I hope you get hit by a train.
I hope the rain neglects your stupid senses.
You deserve this.
All of this.

I never harmed you.
Now I hope the worst for you.
You really messed up now.
Those black, foul phrases.

I hope you get hit by a train.
Never again leave me feeling the same.
You have no idea of the pain.
It stings and burns and kills all of me.
I hate you and I dare you to ever mention my name.
Because it will be the same as you pulling your own trigger.
It really will be the death of you.
Die in anguish. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Mortis-Dark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Death of you...(I hope you get hit by a train...)

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:18:57 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I hope you get hit by a train.
In the fogging rain.
On your way back from service.
You lied at me expense.
Left me in the utter past tense.
Lieing, it must be one of your famous faces.
The one thats one day.
Leaving you feeling awkward in some place strange.

I hope you get hit by a train.
I hope the rain neglects your stupid senses.
You deserve this.
All of this.

I never harmed you.
Now I hope the worst for you.
You really messed up now.
Those black, foul phrases.

I hope you get hit by a train.
Never again leave me feeling the same.
You have no idea of the pain.
It stings and burns and kills all of me.
I hate you and I dare you to ever mention my name.
Because it will be the same as you pulling your own trigger.
It really will be the death of you.
Die in anguish.

Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2005-01-04 18:18:57]
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Re: The Death of you...(I hope you get hit by a train...) (User Rating: 1 )
by breny on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:22:57 PM AEST
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wow is only the thing I can think of saying and......sorry for what I happened to you

Bren

Re: The Death of you...(I hope you get hit by a train...) (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:27:12 PM AEST
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this gives off vibes that it could be angrier, either that or it was and was just edited for the purposes of this site In any case, it's very well written, good job with this!!

Re: The Death of you...(I hope you get hit by a train...) (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:30:18 PM AEST
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Whew! Powerful emotions! It was the title that caught me!
Cheers!

Re: The Death of you...(I hope you get hit by a train...) (User Rating: 1 )
by declinefoale on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 07:38:18 PM AEST
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I think I'm safe in saying that most people have felt like this at one time or another, i really like this.

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