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True Friend
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 06:04:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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You're by my side
Helping with my problem
In you I can confide
As you help me solve 'em
Only you know
Or is it that only you care
Save me from my unseen foe
'Cause only I can properly tear
Tear myself apart
And you are one of few who helps
Show me that what I'm doing isn't smart
One of few who heard my yelps
Slowly you're helping me to mend
And that is why you're a true friend
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2005-01-04 18:04:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: True Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 09:38:18 PM AEST (User
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see sami? that wasn't hard and it turned out well, very nice...
oh and thanks... I feel the compulsive need to dedicate one to your unstable self now... |
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Re: True Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 06:02:52 PM AEST (User
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I do get a bit tired of dedication's on here..And they all sound the bloody same..That said this was not bad..For what it was it did work. |
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Re: True Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 09:44:24 PM AEST (User
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and true friends are the only ones that should be cared about. excellent write. |
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