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Array ( [sid] => 78452 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing More [time] => 2005-01-04 16:20:51 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Singing faces stare back in the mirror
Swirling vortexes break the wall
My past is eternally dead
I know what you said
That one day, this will be my downfall
But now the water is getting clearer

Blue skies don’t die so easily
The portal to my mind is lost in the sands of time
Nothing feels better than singing the song of ventures
Repeating tracks buzz my internal mind

Deep down inside these voices tell me that I’m crazy
But you keep encouraging the fact I’m sane
Condemned ‘til the face of man is pushed my eyes inside out
Does my words make sense to you?
Flying into the sky with metal for wings
As I fall to the bottom of my purgatory [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Nothing More

Contributed by Bones on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 04:20:51 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

Singing faces stare back in the mirror
Swirling vortexes break the wall
My past is eternally dead
I know what you said
That one day, this will be my downfall
But now the water is getting clearer

Blue skies don’t die so easily
The portal to my mind is lost in the sands of time
Nothing feels better than singing the song of ventures
Repeating tracks buzz my internal mind

Deep down inside these voices tell me that I’m crazy
But you keep encouraging the fact I’m sane
Condemned ‘til the face of man is pushed my eyes inside out
Does my words make sense to you?
Flying into the sky with metal for wings
As I fall to the bottom of my purgatory

Copyright © Bones ... [ 2005-01-04 16:20:51]
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Re: Nothing More (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 05:25:48 PM AEST
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Not bad,
but I think you caould change a few lines
and improve it.
"encouraging" is the wrong word I think.
Maybe "reenforcing"
would be better.

Keep writing.
--Ghosty

Re: Nothing More (User Rating: 1 )
by BEE on Friday, 5th May 2006 @ 12:36:23 AM AEST
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VERY NICE I LIKE YOUR POETRY ALL WROTE WELL

PS COMMENT ON SOME OF MY POEMS THANKS

BEE*

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